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well maybe not fail lol because when it comes to the details and stuff your really good that's a sure PASS! but yah and i'm pretty sure you noticed this saying you drew it lol, but it does look a little weird with their position and it looks like he's grabbing her boobs lol only stating the truth, plus it sorta looks like after you noticed that or something like that lol you gave up or something because i don't see her back line and other details in her, also i'm unsure on weather she's running pass him and he trying to stop her or if she's running into him for an embraced hug, but yah i think your probably getting the same empression of this as i am, but to me other then that it is good when looking at details, really the only thing that is a bit out of place is the girl but other then that the guy looks good, hmm.. you probably saw this but yah think you should of move the girl a little move to the right into the guy's arms, and yah figure out the whole proportions deal and that it might look better if his arms were a bit closer to actually hug the girl. hmm... maybe to correct it, if you erase her chest so it makes it seem as if she's hugging him but her face is to the side... hmm.. or something like that XP wait... lol now that i look at it, my bad, i mistook her chest, now that i look at it it looks like it could be her shoulder and i'm pretty sure that's what your going for, lol sorry.. you know i'm not that much of a good observer ^-^;;
wow... that's a bit embaressing lol.. but yah overall pretty good, after all you do want people opinions and i'm just giving you mine so yah..

Wow.... Didn't think it was possible, but I actually almost forgot to comment on one of your drawings! =O And dang, Shiya can really type long comments. Please don't expect anything like that from me. -_- Anyway, that's Lucent and Lily?! Dang that looks so good! I can't draw people hugging at all! I'm trying to learn, but not doing so good right now. That is sooo much better than what I can do! And yeah, kinda messy, but still really good! Messy is good! Hmmn... Weird... I commented earlier in the morning and made a long comment.... From now on I'm commenting early in the morning! xd

Now now Kain. I wouldn't think it's right to say it fails. Sure alot of mistakes and all but there are some very good details as Shiya happened to point out. Although.. I can't see how she could of mistaken that as her chest and not her shoulder. I find that quite funny actually. Maybe for suggestion, and yes Shiya has told me you like critic, and well you somewhat told me yourself in the comment. lol. But right to the suggestion, looking at the picture, I suggest that it would be better if the girl is more to the right of him, which would be his left, and your right. It looks as if she's running away or possibly fainting then running to hug him. Not sure what your trying to capture in this picture but judging by the guy's facial expression, looks almost as if sorrow or forgiveness. And to me It seems that you've given up after you drew the girl. Because there is no face and no back outlining of her. Judging by how you drew her, she is small compared to the guy and so his arms shouldn't be so wide so that once you drew it you noticed how the two did not fit together. Seperately maybe they would work, but together it's a mess as you so put it. Although i should point out it's not a failure. Common mistakes but very good details. Maybe it would of been easier to draw her so you can't see her face at all, just her head and hair outline. It gives it the look of her hugging him and resting her forhead against his chest. May I suggest that next time try and figure out the outlining of both girl and guy, I'm not sure if you did that in this drawing but it does seem as though you've worked on the guy first and possibly an outline of the girl but then you went right in to working on the guy details again. Better luck next time. Overall, It's alright, not perfect, but not a failure.

~Silver

I wouldn't say that it fails. It's a little messy, but that doesn't bother me at all.