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OMG! That looks beautiful! I wish I could draw people from the side like that! It's so cool! I love the feather, it looks really good on her. 3nodding Mmn... Trying to make as long a comment as possible... And it's early morning so my brain can't process much.... But that was just so good! Hmm. That's Sana right? Is that what she looks like when she's waiting for Sorraean to come home? I dunno, I probably won't think that if I'm wrong later today 'cause I'm tired right now and I come up with crazy things when I'm tired. xd But yeah, loved the drawing! (Was this a long enough comment?)

Interesting.. And I assume you like long comments, judging from the fact that sako is asking on whether it's long enough, lol. Also by seeing shiya's comments as well, i'm guessing you like long comments and possibly helpful critic. Hmm.. not much critic to give really, like sako says it's good. It's really good, not many mistakes as far as i can see. The feather is pretty well drawn in showing it's curves and how all the little parts of the feather bend together to complete the whole. Very nice. The drawing is very light though, it's hard to see the feather lining and her hair as well. Also good emotions held within your drawing. A sign and look of... hope.. possible fear, worry even. Amazing how so many emotions can be held within simple strokes and ways of drawing the eyes and mouth, even the position of their head. And I wouldn't be much of a person to judge on something that i'm not aware of, but i'm a bit unsure on her neck and body shape. It looks good but somehow it looks a bit off, like maybe her body should be a little bigger, or her neck a little smaller, but that's just me. I'm unsure of how you wanted to draw it, so best not listen to me. I only give small critic and advice i guess you could call it. Hmm... it's fine.. it looks good as it is though. But great job on it, from the details in her facial expression to the balance in her body, it's good. I apologize for any small confusion on what i said about the neck and body linings. Maybe it was just a trick of my eyes. Then again, your the true judge, take what i say and what others say, and make your own notes and corrections. That's really all i have to say. Have a nice day.

~Silver

lol umm.... oki so silver decided to outwrite my long comments and what not lol haha jk
but yah wow silver, that's a big comment tho o_O
i doubt i can beat thhat, maybe in some of my other comments but yah anyways back to the drawing, ^-^;;
like silver and sako sorta.. said.. XP it's pretty much a good drawing, not many mistakes to really point out which is good cuz yah, means your getting better ^-^
and silver can be a good critic when you want him to be so if hhe likes it then you know you did good lol jk.. well.. it's sorta true, he's nice but when you want him to do harsh criticing just ask him i'm sure he'll do it XP
and agreeing with silver, her emotions really does portray that emotions, a need, a certain wanting, she longs for something, someone, and as sako said, could this possibly be sana waiting for sorrean to come home? and yah it really draws your veiwer in, alot of curiosity is within this drawing, overall, good job ^-^

umm... lol why is sako dressed like u? o_O
i just noticed