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Kiyo582
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Early Chapter coming in!!!! Plz welcome chapter 2 of B.F.G(The Battle for Gaia)

The Battle For Gaia
Chapter 2: Fire 'n Ice

*Kiyo now approches his burnt house to find that his dad on the floor injured*

Kiyo biggrin ad!!!

Kiyo's Dad: Kiyo your okay!I saw u fighting! Why were u fighting in ur dark form? I told you never to fight in your dark form!!! You've got to get control over your emotions! But thats not important now you've sum visitors.

???, ???, and ???: hi

Kiyo: who are you?

???: hi, im CatmouthKakashi.

???: Im hidan.

???: Im Chibikunoichi and my tigers name is Vayne.

Kiyo: what do you need from me?

Hidan: we've been searching for you for 2 years now.

Catmouth:We need your help. We need your help to protect Gaia from the G.O.D. guild.

Kiyo: The guild that destroyed my hometown.

Catmouth: Do you know what G.O.D. even means.

Kiyo: No.

Hidan: It means Gods of destruction.

Chibi: Back to the point. You have the power to kill the guildmaster of G.O.D.

Catmouth: You have the bloodline of dark and light life energy.

Hidan: There are two types of energy. Light and Dark. Your soul is dark but also pure. This means you have x2 the power of anyone born with just 1 of these powers types. You are given capabilites beyond any normal gaian.

Kiyo's Dad: I thought you can only hold 1 type of energy in the body.

Chibi:No, but it is a rare power.

Catmouth: so will you help us kill the G.O.D. guild?

Kiyo: No. I don't need any help! I can kill him alone!

Chibi: Fine. You can't kill him alone though. You need support. its hard enough getting into the guilds terrotory.

Catmouth: But we need him to....

Hidan: I can't believe this... Come on lets just go!

*they leave*

Kiyo's Dad: I can't belive you... they proably want the same as you do. But anyway I have something to give you.

*Kiyo's dad knocks on the fireplace 3 times and a secret passage appears*

Kiyo's Dad: go on theres some thing down there for you.

*Kiyo walks down the stairs and finds a icy blue looking sword and a note*

*Kiyo reads the note. He grabs the icy sword and goes back to his dad*

Kiyo: im going. Heres some medicine to heal your wounds *takes out medicine and hands it to his dad*

Kiyo's dad:*takes the medicine and his wounds start to heal* Thanks i'll be alright. now go!

-Meanwhile-

Hidan: this is getting bad. *shoots 5 holy arrows at solidgers*

Catmouth: How many are there? we've been fighting these solidgers for a long time!*punches the ground with enormous strength causes a earthquake and shoots the enemies in the air with red energy beams*

Chibi: Come on this is getting exagausting!*throws her fan at the enemies cutting them in half* *Vayne rowrs with enormous courage scarying the enemies into a stage of fright*

Hidan: Catmouth watch out! A solidger is right behind you!

Catmouth: what the...

???: Dragon's Flame!!!*hits the solidger setting him on fire*

All 3: Took you long enough!

Catmouth: Thanks Kiyo.

Kiyo: Every1 move!

All 3: okay!

Kiyo:Fire 'N Ice Typhoon!!!! *the typhoon sucked up the solidgers killing them in a massive barrage of fire and ice*

Hidan: thanks

Chibi: what made change your mind though?

Kiyo: This note. I'll read it.

The note says: Dear reader of this note. This is the ancient frostbite blade that is a treasure to this bloodline. Please use it for our familys honor. This was made from holy energy and ice. Please help kill the G.O.D. guild. If you make it there I will be there waiting for you.

Sinceraly your, Mother

Kiyo: my mom mysteriously disappeared the day I left my hometown.

Hidan: that was 2 years ago she must have found out about the G.O.D. guild and she went to fight the guildmaster.

Kiyo: she had a very pure heart. her power was great and she used all of her powers to help the villagers in anyway possible.

Catmouth: so are you joining us.

Kiyo: Yea.

Chibi: Thank you, now we have the power to beat the guildmaster.

Hidan: Lets keep on going guys we need to make our way to the HQ of the G.O.D. guild.

Kiyo: Alright lets go!

End of Chapter 2


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RAINBOW JELLYFISH
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comment Commented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 01:46pm
Ohmegosh this is gettin' so interestin'!!!! XD
Something confused me tho... Kiyo finds his dad lying on the floor fataly injured, but no one seems to do anythin' about it.... lol. =)
I g2g read the 3rd chapterrrrr. >.< buh-bye!!!!


comment Commented on: Wed Jul 23, 2008 @ 01:54am
i edited that and fixed the problem. Thanx for the info.



Kiyo582
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RAINBOW JELLYFISH
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comment Commented on: Wed Jul 23, 2008 @ 03:49pm
Add this these in=[]
Kiyo: im going. R u okay[?] here take this.[*hands him a vial of powerful medicine*]

Kiyo's dad:*takes the medicine and his wounds start to heal* Thanks i'll be alright[.] now go on ahead!
And, Also, (I should've mentioned this before, but...) you need to have proper punctuation and spelling in these kind of things or else they get confusing. n0 733t, d00d!!!1 and no wat or any1s either you make run on sentences like this that need puncuation. pretend you're the reader to make sure it makes sense. k?


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