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hey guys more info on my rp char and my futrue manga!

well the storyline is pretty much this.

byakuya kuchiki dies. rukia and the other soul reapers bury him and put his equipment into a stone box. the stone box is sealed onto the gravestone, waiting for the right person to claim it...

the kuchiki family find a baby in a clan area called "ketsueki"

the family takes the baby in hope of raising him just like byakuya.

in honor of their dead son, they named the child byakuya ketsueki, but they want it a secret so they give him a secondary name...shisora...

as shisora grows up the parents die when he is about 14. leaving him to live with his new sister, rukia. after a while shisora goes to konahagakure. there he meets his new friends. vince, xine, chris and rhea. when he hits 15, shisora goes into his first war.. as he was about to assasinate i big ninja lord, he was found sneaking around the castle and died. the best healers in the leaf village tried healing him for 3 weeks and he finally recovered from 3 massive shots to the heart and 5 to the back. he then decides to train as a soul reaper with his elder sister rukia and leaves his friends, promising to return..

shisora spends 3 years training and becomes a replacement for byakuya, becomming 6th or 7th company captain. after doing massive thinking and keeping up with news from the leaf village, shisora finds out that the rogue ninja orginazation the Akatsuki has been defeated and all members are now dead...

shisora then leaves the soul society and decides to make an orginazation to fufill the duties of the akatsuki and do more then they have ever dreamed. during the time period of when shisora is travelling alone, he runs into a mysterious ninja that attacks him, and gives him a "curse mark", afterwards he runs into someone named "sasuke" that steals his eyes and runs off to claim his money (shisora is related to the uchiha and kuchiki family in a way, shisora obtained the mangekyou sharingan earlier before his departure from the soul society) shisora then becomes a blind soul reaper. soon he runs into 13 ninja (each were found in a different ninja village) and makes an orginazation (yet to be named!) then shisora changes his name to SHIUMIDASU (BRINGER OF DEATH)



that is maybe half of the story line for byakuya ketsueki and my manga i shal update it soon! comments on this entry please! smile



*UPDATE* yep finally i found out more! b y the way shiumidasu turns into a half vampire but that explains in another entry..ill start off AFTER he passes out.


shiumidasu finally awakens and finds the swordsman. after a long talk the swordsman agrees to join, lifting his hood he reveals to be one o fthe seven swordsmen kisame.

shiumidasu gathers all his members in a meeting to decide a place for their hideout.
they come down to 2 places, the last place the akatsuki had...or to this white castle out in the "sector of darkness"

the group decided the"sector of darkness". once they got there they checked the area, the castle hovered over a dark pit..inside the castle were deberis everywhere. shiumidasu checked the computers and found out that there was once a group called "orginazation XIII" that was defeated 4 years ago..
shiumidasu did reasearch on the oginazation XIII while the others made they'reselves at home... shiumidasu saw all the members and how they died. shiumidasu also found out that the members were "nobodies" and he saw the nobodies and their somebodies. when shiumidasu came across orginazation XIII member number 6 was somehwat a resemblance to him. but he didnt remember being a heartless at any point in his life. shiumidasu then moved on to repairing the castle. after that was done., shiumidasu returned to his village to say "hello" to his friends.

shiumidasu came to the secret hangout him and his friends visited and waited...once they all came he went in stealth mode. his friends were talking about seeing "shisora" after that silence rang...shiumidasu went out the hideout and walked toward it again making it look like he just came.

after saying "hello guys long time no see..." he pulled out his sword yamato (that story will be told on how he got it later) took off his hood revealing to them that he was their close friend shisora. "what happened to him" they though because of his blindfold. shiumidasu then used his speed and acuracy to hurt his friends. he came behind vince and stabbed him in the back, went over to rhea stabbed her in the stomach, went over to xine cut her back and went over to chris and stabbed his back. before shiumidasu left he left a note beside rhea and spoke a different language saying "im sorry". xine called the medics and and after 2 weeks they were all better. they met together the next day discussing what their best friend had done. rhea said she knew how to track shiumidasu down, but it would take practice to learn the technique.


sorry guys thats all you get for now! i did figure out what happens but i just have to put more thought into it. hope ya liked it and comment!!!!!!!


P.S:im changing my avatar's name to "shiumidasu" sometime after i start my manga!




*UPDATE2*

after three months rhea perfected her technique and it was time to track shiumidasu.

rhea gave a quick explaination about how she can track the left over chakra that shiumidasu left behind when he used his long distance teleportation spell.
she focussed her chakara to reveal a trail of chakra that they could follw by using the same spell.

they arrived just outside the castle and used a stealth jutsu to sneak in. the made it up to the 5th corridor and saw it completely cover in blood at the end of the hall way they saw a hooded figure killing a soldier violently. the hooded figure sensed a pressence and teleported. as they quickly ran to out the door they came across a gap..a big gap...they thought there was no way to get across to the other side but vince took a step and realized that it is an invisible bridge. they made it across and came to a door. on the other side of it they heard screaming and heard a familiar voice talking. as they listened they could hear footsteps fading away.

they broke the door and ran after the figure the figure stopped at a platform, a dead end lied. the figure took off his hood to reveal that it was shiumidasu. shiumidasu laughed insanly and drew his sword out of his sheath. his friends did the same and they thought they had the upper hand in this battle because shiumidasu was blind. they were wrong....


thats all i have figured so far guys. i think i will post the rest tomarrow. bye bye!!!!!! and coment!!!!!!!!


*UPDATE 3*

(this is gonna be quick and easy because an error accured when i tried submitting the 3rd update 30 minutes ago so im pissed about so many errors on my computer)

a big sword fight broke out between shiumidasu and his friends after injuring his friends he asked if they read the note he left, they didnt know what the note said and they were too busy to figure what it said. shiumidasu explained what it said and his friends were in toruble once they realized what they had done, they had to get down to the first floor before the orginazation (yet to be named) finds them and kills them. shiumidasu would wait while the others made their way down. the orginazation came and found shiumidasu, they questioned him and shiumidasu was given 3 choices, be killed, find his friends and kill them or leave the orginazation. shiumidasu left and joined his friends. shiumidasu decided to re-gain what he had lost in the past and find his sister rukia, but this time he wanted to have his friends come with him.

the group made their way into the soul society where shiumidasu showed his friends around and showed them where they were to sleep while they were in the soul society. shiumidasu went to find rukia and regain his honor.


ok guys! i hope you liked that part. im making the next update on sunday or monday! comment if you have any questions or comment to compliment!! bye bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!