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My latest writing...thought you may want to read it....
Beauty displaced at the center of the soul,
Deepened becoming with untrained wit,
Look for me, wait for me,
Become what I may
Where underneath I lay, I wait,
A strength once lost has now been found,
We all are waiting, to go under, to drown
Honey, oh darling, come with me now,
Hide behind that almighty outside,
Nobody knows and nobody cares,
For what I know your love, your wear,
Come back, come back, don't run away
For all we know, we may be saved,
Now brushed against the nearest danger,
Save me, save you, save us now






User Comments: [4]
spunky319
Community Member





Sat Dec 03, 2005 @ 10:00pm


Deep... i like it... and though many people wouldn't i understand it... it's very kool... and never stop writing!!! blaugh


lil_miss_aquarius
Community Member





Sat Dec 03, 2005 @ 11:21pm


Thank you. This is one of my favourites and I just wrote it infront of the computer.


spunky319
Community Member





Sun Dec 04, 2005 @ 01:29am


O_O eek eek as much as i like my talent for writing poetry... i wish i could write like u!!! i can only write sonnets... but urs are sooo good!!!


lil_miss_aquarius
Community Member





Sun Dec 04, 2005 @ 04:25pm


Lol...Thank you. It just kinda comes to me. There are times when I can just hit a real emotional high and write 3 or 4 poems at once. I have even tried inspirational poetry and it worked pretty good.


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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