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First Gaia Poem... Please critisize, i need to learn how to write... Wasted (?) Life Stare at the ceiling, and listen to the clock The seconds go tick, as the minutes go tock I lay alone in my bed as i look at the clock My heart beats slowly, as the clock goes tock I think of you, as my pulse drops My heart still yearns for you, as it slowly stops I inhale my last breath as i cry And laying, all alone, on my bed, I die

Posted by: Fitaur Thu Dec 22, 2005 @ 05:25am

[i:5d371ce805]~~Just a simple slave to my Goddess~~[/i:5d371ce805]
~~[b:5d371ce805][u:5d371ce805]Atesia[/b:5d371ce805][/u:5d371ce805]~~
Become a Minion to Atesia~! [/color:5d371ce805]
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Queen of the Reich
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Commented on: Fri Dec 23, 2005 @ 05:21am


	that was really good! (bet you didnt expect me to read this, huh?) but please dont really die....

Commented on: Sat Dec 24, 2005 @ 04:23am


	I wont really die.... and from you..... than this must really be a good poem... wow...

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Cupcake Bob
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Commented on: Wed Jan 11, 2006 @ 08:20pm


	Psst.. It's "ceiling". ^^

Commented on: Sat Feb 11, 2006 @ 05:27pm


	Sniffles...I wanna cry.... It's so....good... crying Blows nose into a tissue >< Hi! =O I'm Ming! Ronin's gf, so hi! Wanna talk? Let's get to know each other! ...Yeah... I like acting like a little kid since I'm actually hyper at the moment since I ate some ice crema. Yes! I'm crazy, since it's still winter-like, and it's going to have a snow storm of such thing, that's gonna happen soon. =P ...I gonna caam down before I use up al my strength in typig all this! ....I'm okay!! ^o^

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Fitaur
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Commented on: Wed Mar 22, 2006 @ 08:04pm


	Ummm... hi ronins gf.....

Commented on: Mon Mar 27, 2006 @ 05:38pm


	I think it's very good. A little short, but very good. It seems so... sarrowful... Do you want a hug?

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Fitaur
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Commented on: Wed May 24, 2006 @ 03:16pm


	sure... why not, eh? ^^

Commented on: Thu May 03, 2007 @ 06:21pm


	It's really good although it was short but it was still good biggrin

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Commented on: Thu Jun 28, 2007 @ 02:07am


	sounds so real. its better than what i can write

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