mildly.amused.froggy
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/-2/4/2
『Creativity:』 ?/2/3/5
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/3/4
『Completeness:』 ?/0/4.5/4.5
『Critical:』
-2 the story was well written in its own style, but the character portrayed does not match the emotions in the story.
+1, love the colour scheme, and flow of this.
+0, the story was very well done, a perfect mix of your 1st and 2nd writing styles. It is going to be close.
『Overall:』 14.5
『Character:』 ?/-2/4/2
『Creativity:』 ?/2/3/5
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/3/4
『Completeness:』 ?/0/4.5/4.5
『Critical:』
-2 the story was well written in its own style, but the character portrayed does not match the emotions in the story.
+1, love the colour scheme, and flow of this.
+0, the story was very well done, a perfect mix of your 1st and 2nd writing styles. It is going to be close.
『Overall:』 14.5
lovest harding
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/4/5/9
『Creativity:』 ?/2/3/5
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/2/2.5/4.5
『Completeness:』 ?/1/4/5
『Critical:』
+0 the entry was nice, it just wasn't anything too amazing
+1, Really is the character that came out of the writing.
+0, Again a consistent effort from you. The only problem I have with it is I think she could have progressed further to her 'godly state.
『Overall:』 24.5
『Character:』 ?/4/5/9
『Creativity:』 ?/2/3/5
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/2/2.5/4.5
『Completeness:』 ?/1/4/5
『Critical:』
+0 the entry was nice, it just wasn't anything too amazing
+1, Really is the character that came out of the writing.
+0, Again a consistent effort from you. The only problem I have with it is I think she could have progressed further to her 'godly state.
『Overall:』 24.5
『Darkness』
Jamais Changeant
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/3/4/7
『Creativity:』 ?/1/3/4
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/3/4
『Completeness:』 ?/-1/4/3
『Critical:』
+1 I rather enjoyed the transitions and the overall avatar looks nice
-1, the matching was a little bit sketchy in places (Splash of res near the feet?) but I think that you did a good job overall.
『Overall:』 18
『Character:』 ?/3/4/7
『Creativity:』 ?/1/3/4
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/3/4
『Completeness:』 ?/-1/4/3
『Critical:』
+1 I rather enjoyed the transitions and the overall avatar looks nice
-1, the matching was a little bit sketchy in places (Splash of res near the feet?) but I think that you did a good job overall.
『Overall:』 18
『Earth』
A_Homeless_Nobody
No Entry - Eliminated
Ratt Scabies
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/5/2/7
『Creativity:』 ?/5/4/9
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/-1/0/-1
『Completeness:』 ?/-1/1/0
『Critical:』
+4, The overall image of the final avatar isn't that good, but the story and character was exceptional
-2, not really liking the turn this round took. I think the main problem is we only see Scott's powers. We don't see the change in the character.
『Overall:』 17
『Character:』 ?/5/2/7
『Creativity:』 ?/5/4/9
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/-1/0/-1
『Completeness:』 ?/-1/1/0
『Critical:』
+4, The overall image of the final avatar isn't that good, but the story and character was exceptional
-2, not really liking the turn this round took. I think the main problem is we only see Scott's powers. We don't see the change in the character.
『Overall:』 17
『Fire』
ooky dookz
No Entry - Eliminated
Elphaba the Renthead
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/2/2/4
『Creativity:』 ?/-1/3/2
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/5/6
『Completeness:』 ?/1/4/5
『Critical:』
-2, the story was okay, but the avatar itself seemed to rely to heavily on matching. It needed a better balance on image and character
-1, The avatar is very good... but I think that it strays from what the challenge is looking for because she seems to have progressed too far in her 'god' persona.
『Overall:』 14
『Character:』 ?/2/2/4
『Creativity:』 ?/-1/3/2
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/5/6
『Completeness:』 ?/1/4/5
『Critical:』
-2, the story was okay, but the avatar itself seemed to rely to heavily on matching. It needed a better balance on image and character
-1, The avatar is very good... but I think that it strays from what the challenge is looking for because she seems to have progressed too far in her 'god' persona.
『Overall:』 14
『Water』
Quiet Judgments
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/1/4/5
『Creativity:』 ?/3/5/8
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/1/2
『Completeness:』 ?/0/4/4
『Critical:』
-3, Ultimately the avatar is okay, but I think relying on a background image you provided is rather dull. It would have been much more interesting to have the image of the character by itself.
0, Triforce'd? Haha.
-2, His friends all look so awesome (especially the one in the middle). But your main character... what happened. The head looks disastrous.
『Overall:』 14
『Character:』 ?/1/4/5
『Creativity:』 ?/3/5/8
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/1/2
『Completeness:』 ?/0/4/4
『Critical:』
-3, Ultimately the avatar is okay, but I think relying on a background image you provided is rather dull. It would have been much more interesting to have the image of the character by itself.
0, Triforce'd? Haha.
-2, His friends all look so awesome (especially the one in the middle). But your main character... what happened. The head looks disastrous.
『Overall:』 14
The Angelic Oreo
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/-1/2/1
『Creativity:』 ?/1/3/4
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/2/3
『Completeness:』 ?/-1/2/1
『Critical:』
-1, I liked the third version the best.
+0, the blues are all pretty off, but they oddly work for me.
『Overall:』 8
『Character:』 ?/-1/2/1
『Creativity:』 ?/1/3/4
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/2/3
『Completeness:』 ?/-1/2/1
『Critical:』
-1, I liked the third version the best.
+0, the blues are all pretty off, but they oddly work for me.
『Overall:』 8
