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Who am I? / Who will I be?
By Dominick Cortes


I struggle from who I am every day, every waking minute of my life

It tears
Glares
Torments
Anguishes
Kills me with every living thought.

I try to be an angel so everyone can love me…but

I can’t lie
Nor hide
Towards the light
I am only a spawn of Sin.
It cracks
Breaks
Bends my reality as I try…
Try so hard to find out who I am.
And yet…
Even with days with lack of beautiful rest,
I haven’t found myself!
But wait,
Could it be?
I am as I said?!
Just a reality unquenchable?
Shall I, just be a cloud?






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XxSeductive DeathxX
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commentCommented on: Tue Sep 22, 2009 @ 02:46am
o.o nyu~ depressing but i think cool and um x.x;; well just depressing i think that the was its written out is a bit odd but it gives it a better feeling of how u want it read each word has a meaning and its ment to have its own second in the spot light and if im wrong then sorry i was trying to be nice but crytisic at the same time not good with critisism


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