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Future
By Dominick Cortes


Today is crafted by hands
Fingers that shape Tomorrow's form
And ideas that inspire the Future.

But Today skitters
Tomorrow slips through
Cracking as the Future crumbles.

Today was golden
Tomorrow starts to break
And the Future decays.

Despair only holds Today
As the mirror crashes on Tomorrow
Each shard, flying into the Future.

When time is on Today's side,
Tomorrow's form may crash up and down
But the future is only a faint dream.

But Today isn't always Today
For Tomorrow always fades away;
And the Future speeds onto the Present.

So never stall on Today,
And always believe on Tomorrow,
That there's Gold in the Future.






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BitBit90
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 08, 2009 @ 04:31am
Oh wow that was really good. I loved your concept on time. It was really enlightening. The brooding thought that tomorrow creates a new hope and a new dawn is nice end to it. I do really enjoy this one though. Great Job. GOD AND THE IMAGERY IS AMAZING


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