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part of a story (please comment on it) Okay well this is part of a story, please tell me what it's like Kaoru pressed herself against the wall next to the door, panting slightly with the exertion. She held her gun in her right hand and held the door handle with her left. She wiped her brow of the sweat that accumilated druing her run, she felt slightly winded. But she knew that if she misstepped in this situation it would mean that she would be dead. She finally got her breathing to around normal and listened, it was dead silent, which was very strange. If it was too dangerous for her to go on she would radio HQ for an evac, but she had to figure out her next option..... please tell me how you like it

Posted by: KaoruPhoenix Mon Jan 09, 2006 @ 11:06pm

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Commented on: Mon Jan 09, 2006 @ 11:32pm


	man.....that;s f*ing good!!! blaugh** im a little jealous

Commented on: Mon Jan 09, 2006 @ 11:56pm

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Commented on: Tue Jan 10, 2006 @ 12:18am


	awesome K-chan! ::huggles:: i wanna read more of it! blaugh heart

Commented on: Tue Jan 10, 2006 @ 02:32am


	I loved it I want to read more! It's suspenseful...Tell me when you post more! But YAY!! so good! heart sweatdrop dang the add coment button's small...no wonder my eyes couldn't see it...

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Commented on: Mon Jan 16, 2006 @ 06:45am


	...but wats the rest of it, and if theres not a "rest of it" plz make 1, i really like to read and this sounds pretty good smile

Commented on: Wed Feb 15, 2006 @ 11:36pm


	Ane-san has a gun ?! Uwahhh , how coool is that cool ! I like it but , the last two sentences are okay but not as good as the rest of it ... ( i'm gonna get hurt for that .. ) Hmmm , still good though , nice hair doo !

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