lovest harding
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/5/5/10
『Creativity:』 ?/4/5/9
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/-2/3/1
『Completeness:』 ?/-2/4/2
『Critical:』
-1, I really liked the idea of this character from the beginning but now I feel as though you are getting to wrapped up in the story rather than the avatar itself.
+2, I like the contrast between the mood of the piece, and the element.
『Overall:』 23
『Character:』 ?/5/5/10
『Creativity:』 ?/4/5/9
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/-2/3/1
『Completeness:』 ?/-2/4/2
『Critical:』
-1, I really liked the idea of this character from the beginning but now I feel as though you are getting to wrapped up in the story rather than the avatar itself.
+2, I like the contrast between the mood of the piece, and the element.
『Overall:』 23
『Darkness』
Jamais Changeant
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/-3/4/1
『Creativity:』 ?/4/4/8
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/3/4
『Completeness:』 ?/1/4/5
『Critical:』
-1, you did really great with the avatar this time around, but I just wish there was a little less detail to the face so we could see her personality.
+1, I like that odd blue that you used. You did a good job with it.
『Overall:』 18
『Character:』 ?/-3/4/1
『Creativity:』 ?/4/4/8
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/1/3/4
『Completeness:』 ?/1/4/5
『Critical:』
-1, you did really great with the avatar this time around, but I just wish there was a little less detail to the face so we could see her personality.
+1, I like that odd blue that you used. You did a good job with it.
『Overall:』 18
『Earth』
Ratt Scabies
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/5/3/8
『Creativity:』 ?/5/3/8
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/2/2/4
『Completeness:』 ?/2/4/6
『Critical:』
+2, this has got to be my favorite entry and probably my favorite story. I was really pulled in by the transitions.
+1, I was worried at first with the story, but it pulled through.
-1, I actually like the second last one better than your chosen final.
『Overall:』 38
『Character:』 ?/5/3/8
『Creativity:』 ?/5/3/8
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/2/2/4
『Completeness:』 ?/2/4/6
『Critical:』
+2, this has got to be my favorite entry and probably my favorite story. I was really pulled in by the transitions.
+1, I was worried at first with the story, but it pulled through.
-1, I actually like the second last one better than your chosen final.
『Overall:』 38
『Fire』
Elphaba the Renthead
Dropped Out
『Water』
Quiet Judgments
⊱Ratings: Xolkiyr/Last of 9/general_amlex/Overall⊰
『Character:』 ?/3/3/6
『Creativity:』 ?/3/4/7
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/2/3/5
『Completeness:』 ?/3/4/7
『Critical:』
+1, I'm glad to see more attention to the avatar this time around.
-1, I hate to be so nit-picky, but the gold bits near the feet and the torso seem unnecessary, and are distracting. ;S
『Overall:』 25
『Character:』 ?/3/3/6
『Creativity:』 ?/3/4/7
『Cohesiveness:』 ?/2/3/5
『Completeness:』 ?/3/4/7
『Critical:』
+1, I'm glad to see more attention to the avatar this time around.
-1, I hate to be so nit-picky, but the gold bits near the feet and the torso seem unnecessary, and are distracting. ;S
『Overall:』 25
