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THIS IS THE JOURNEL OF THE DEVILS DAUGHTER! Just Kidding. Leave a comment if you want, other then that, Have fun with your life, or whats left of it! evil twisted Hey all you freaks! Whats up and how are you? The names alex, and proud of it. Well, here is the story and stick with it! When I was a little girl, i traveled half way around the United States. One of my favorite places was in Colorado. I loved it there. Im fourteen, not single, go to High school(Silver state high), and I love to play games. Halo, Midnight Club, all sorts of games. If any of you peeps need some help, or some hiding places in any of the Halo's, then ask me. I know alot. lol.
Here is a story i want u too rate, right now, im not done. but its still my roughdraft and i want u to rate it. thanks.
Ravens Story
Written by: Alex Temple
June 29, 2006
Raven is a wolf that lives in a pack in Nebraska, that has not yet come in contact with any humans. Her appearance: Pure black coat, Green Eyes, and is six months old. She has a pack of her own. Her pack contains nine wolves. Her only brother(Kyle) is a pure white wolf with black eyes that is the same age as Raven. Ravens twin sisters(Stacy) is half black and half brown with blue eyes, and Ravens other sister(Grace) is a pure brown wolf with Green eyes, Ravens sisters are the same age as herself. Her father(Mike)is a pure grey wolf with white eyes and is in her pack too, but her mother had died when Raven and her brother and sisters where only puppies, Of course it was of natural causes. The other four wolves were outsiders pushed out of their old packs. One of the four wolves is a Female, her name is Katrina, she is black with a white paw and also is the pups foster mother. The other three wolves are males, they’re names are Billy, Tick, and Tyler. Billy is a white wolf with four white paws and yellow eyes. Tick is a white wolf with a black ear with blue eyes. Tyler is a grey and white mixed with dark green eyes. This story contains violence, adventure, and minimal romance.
Chapter One: The Beginning of a New Day.
Its early in the morning and its raining outside. Raven was asleep in the den next to her family and the rest of her pack, when suddenly a loud crack awakens her. She gets up and leaves the warmth of her pack and sits at the entrance of the den. She just looks at the rain hit the ground, then goes back to the pack. When she starts to get bundled up next to her brother Kyle, he wakes up and starts to play with her. She lets out a yelp as he pulls on her tail with his teeth. When she yelped, the whole pack awoke from their deep slumber. They all where alert, with their ears up, listening. Then they all see that it was just the pups. Mike looks at them sternly as if to say cut it out. When everyone was awake, the pack decided to go hunting for a mornings meal. The pack started to negotiate about who should stay and watch the pups. They decided to make Katrina watch them. When the rest of the pack was about to leave the den, Mike looked back at the pups and howled, then ran after the hunting party. When the puppies father and the others where out, they decided to play together. But before they got any smart ideas, Katrina grabbed Kyle in her jaws and started to groom him while the others played. He started to struggle to get to his sister Raven, but Katrina had a good hold on him. While Kyle was getting groomed, Raven crept up on Stacy and Grace while they were playing tag. Raven crept silently and POUNCED onto Grace. Grace let out a loud yelp and then there was silence for a second or two. Then Stacy bit Ravens tail and Raven yelped, the two puppies didn’t know it but Grace was about to pounce on them. When Grace was about to knock Raven over, Raven moved and Grace fell onto Stacy. They all started to run from each other when Kyle finally got done with his bath. Then Raven slowly crept up on him while the others where playing. Before she could get into the pouncing position, he looked at her sternly and she started to back off when he pounced on her and started to bite her ear. When Katrina got Kyle back into her teeth, this time she wouldn’t let go until he settled down. Then growled at the others to settle down too. Of course they didn’t, so she had to get up and separate them.
When they all had settled down, the rest of the pack came back. The first one to enter the den was their father. The others just came in after him, behind them was a buck carcass. Once the puppies saw this, they just had to have some, but when in a pack, one most wait until the alpha male and the rest of the adults eat their fill, until one can eat their own. When the adults had eaten the puppies ran over to the carcass, practically tripping over themselves just to get a few mouthfuls of food in the stomachs. When they got their little paws on the carcass, they couldn’t rip anything off, no matter how hard they tried, luckily Katrina had been watching all of this. When she got up to go and help them, Mike growled at her as if to say, let them figure this out. She sat back down in a hustle. The pups started whimpering, and then Raven started to think how to get such good meat with their little teeth. Since half of the deer was still skin and fur, her brother and sisters were trying to chew that side, she looked at the side that didn’t have fur at all. She barked at Kyle and then he came over and Raven started to head towards the furless side. She chomped down hard on the deer’s hide with her canines, and started ripping off huge chunks of meat. Kyle started to eat what She had pulled off. With them eating, Stacy and Grace held their heads up and watched, then went over to eat what Raven had pulled off. Raven was so happy that she had figured this out. This was her first mouthful of meat, before this day, they only had gotten milk from Katrina, their foster mother. On occasion, the pack would have two deer.
When the pups had finished, they went over to their father and just looked at him for a few minutes and then went and laid down next to Katrina and instead of laying down next to Katrina, Raven walked toward Tick, which was only two months older then herself. When she was right next of him, he just looked at her with intent. There was a split second that they both were connected, but he turned his head and laid back down. Raven watched her family and the rest of the pack go to sleep. When she saw all of them go to sleep, and was sure that everyone was asleep, she had gotten up and walked toward the entrance of the den, when Kyle opened his eyes and yawned. She stood still for a second while he looked at her with an odd look as if he where thinking what in the world she was doing. Then he got up and started to go toward her. When she realized that he was coming near her, she started to run toward him. He paused and then she jumped on top of him and put her paw on his mouth. Then she got off of him and they both walked out of the den together. Even though it was dark and cold, they went to see what was outside of the den. When they went to go and see what was outside of the den, a strange noise had startled the both of them. When they looked what it was, it was Mike, their father. He scowled at them as if it was their bedtime. Then they all went back to the den. To make sure they didn’t have anymore bright ideas, he slept by the entrance of the den.
When it was the next morning, Raven was the first to wake. She looked around the den to see were everyone was there. When she saw no one, she looked at her sisters and her brother. Raven walked over to Kyle and nudged him with her nose. He rolled over on top of her foot and then she licked him. He swiped at his face as if there was a fly. Then when Raven had had enough, she bit his nose. He jumped up, and looked ferocious. Raven wasn’t a bit afraid, because he doesn’t look very scary. When both of them were awake, Raven pranced over to Stacy and Grace and used the same routine that she had used on Kyle. Bit their noses then licked their faces. The only thing that was different, was that they woke up when Raven licked their face. When all of the pups where awake, they all looked and sniffed around to find the rest of the pack. When they went to the dens entrance, they all nearly got ran over by Billy and Tyler. Billy was all wet and so was Tyler. Ravens guess was that they both went to the nearby river. Raven, her brother and sisters always wanted to go to the river, but they couldn’t because they were all to young. But now, they are all the right age to go. Raven still couldn’t find their father, Katrina, or Tick. But before she had said anything, they came in slowly because they were talking. Raven didn’t know what they were talking about, but she had seen Tick, and jumped on him and started to play with him. He pushed her down and laughed. She started to laugh too. But then she jumped onto her father. He looked at her, then went back to talking to Katrina. Tick, Billy, Tyler and Raven started to play together. Stacy, Kyle and Grace just looked at Raven enthusiastically. When Tick had seen that they were just sitting there, he went over and corralled them into a circle along with Billy. Then without warning, Raven jumped onto Kyle and started bighting his leg, everyone except Mike and Katrina which were still talking. All of them started to play with each other. Kyle started to growl at Bill, when Tick, jumped onto Raven and started nibbling at her ear. Just then it was broken up as fast as it started. Mike started to howl and all of the pack followed him over to the pups. Each puppy got carried in an adults mouth. Tick carried Kyle, Mike carried Raven, Billy carried Grace, and Katrina carried Stacy. Raven had no clue where she and her pack were going. Just then the pack started to run. They all looked very graceful. When they all stopped, it turned out that they were at the river. When they were there, the puppies got to go and play around in water. The puppies were on constant surveillance by the adults. Mike and the others laid down and watched the pups. Raven had a brilliant idea! She had seen her brother standing on a small rock by the river. She pushed him in with her nose, and made it look like it was his fault that he fell in. Then she got onto the rock and acted like she was king of the hill. Stacy and Grace joined in and pushed Raven into the river. Kyle splashed Raven with water and smiled. Then Tick got up and pushed Grace and Stacy into the water as well, then went and laid down. When they were all wet, they began to play and got all soaking wet. When they got out they shook off, and went over to Mike. When he saw that they were all done, he howled and they all went back to the den.
When they all were back, he assembled everyone except for the pups and then laid down. Everyone laid down next to him.
Chapter Two: Hunting Time!
When it was the next day, all of the adults had woken the pups. When they were awake, Mike made them follow him. When the whole pack was outside of the den, the adults started to run and made the pups run with them. When they stopped running, it turned out that they were all in a meadow with tall grass. Raven, Kyle, Stacy and Grace had never seen anything like it until now. When the pups saw Mike and the rest of the adults crouching, they crouched too. The only thing Raven didn’t understand was what they were crouching for? Then Raven saw a herd of deer in the open field. She couldn’t believe her eyes! Their father took them hunting. She started to get close to the end of the tall grass. Just then, her brother Kyle pounced out into the open. He started to bark and chase all of the deer. When the pack was in position, Kyle spoiled it. When all of the deer got chased away and all of the pack was still hungry, Kyle pranced back to the pack and sat right next to Raven.
When he got back, the whole pack looked at him in disappointment. Even Billy snapped at him for doing that. When everyone got back to the den, Raven looked over at Kyle because he had his tail between his legs and was walking behind the whole pack. Raven slowed down so that he could catch up and she licked his face as if she were saying, its ok, maybe next time we will get them. Kyle started to get a little more confidante. Then Raven pranced into the den with her father looking at her. The next week or so, they began to train the pups to hunt. Of course they tried to hunt small things like rabbits and squirrels. The only thing was, was that Raven out of all of them, learned to hunt the fastest. When Kyle, Grace, and Stacy were still in training, Raven was out with the hunting party. Her favorite thing to hunt would be doe’s, and fawns. She always liked a good chase. But one day when the whole pack was out hunting for dinner, Raven heard something and decided to go and see what it was. When she saw it, she had no idea what it was. It looked just like her but, it was small, and really fast, it also had a really big tail. She decided to go and see what it was. It turned out that it was a fox. It ran away with lightning speed, so Raven decided to go back to the hunting party. She got there just in time to find that it was time to get ready and take a deer and kill it. Then with furious speed, the pack ran and the herd of deer fled for their lives. When Mike had seen one that had a limp, he howled and all of the wolves ran after it. When Raven was just about to pounce onto the deer, another wolf got to it first. When Raven had seen this she got very angry and attacked the imposter. The others however, just sat there and watched Raven fight. When Raven got hold of the imposter wolf’s neck, he growled at her and pinned her to the ground. She couldn’t get out and was trapped under him. When her pack had seen this, Kyle rushed over and pushed him off of her and chased him away. When Raven had tried to get up, she noticed that she had seen that wolf before, but she couldn’t remember who he was. After that, the pack went back to the deer’s carcass and ate there in peace and quite. When the whole pack had finished their meal, Kyle came back and grabbed a few mouthfuls of food. When the pack was full, they went back to the den to sleep. When they got to the den, they went to sleep, but Raven on the other hand, wanted to find that wolf. So when her pack was sleeping, she tried to sneak out and Grace woke up and trotted toward her. While the pack was still sleeping, they both went to find the imposter.
When they had crossed the river, they were in another packs territory but didn’t know it. When they gone into a field just a few miles away from there den, they had seen and heard something in the bushes. It turned out that it was the imposter wolf they had seen earlier. When Raven went over to see him, he growled and looked at her as if he were to say, leave me alone. Then Raven began to remember who he really was. He was the puppy that came over to play with them, it was Steven! She couldn’t believe her eyes, she thought that he lived really far away. She went over to lick his face in happiness, but when she did, he didn’t recognize her, he just looked at her with an odd stare. Raven knew how to get him to remember her, when they were pups, she used to pull his tail all of the time. When she grabbed onto his tail, he growled and then he remembered who she was, it was Raven. When he realized who she was, he went over to her and started licking her face. Then the three of them went back to the river and played together for a few hours. But the fun had ended when Raven heard a noise and looked at the tree where it was coming from. It was Kyle, he was growling ferociously and was bearing his long-sharp canines at Steven. Kyle didn’t know who he was. Kyle was coming over to Raven and Grace to bark at them, when Steven jumped in front of them both and try to tell Kyle to back off, but Kyle was not having none of it. They both fought each other for a few minutes, then Raven and Grace had to break it up. When the fighting was over, everyone had there shares of battle wounds. Raven was the worst one. She had a huge gash in her leg and was hurting really bad. Steven was a huge wolf, but got a few bites on his back. Kyle just got some scratches on his side, and Grace got a few scratches on her back leg. When Kyle barked at Grace and Raven to come with him, Grace went, but Raven stayed because of her wound. Kyle barked at her again, but soon left Raven because she disobeyed him. It didn’t matter anyway because Kyle wasn’t the alpha male. Raven just watched Kyle and Grace crossing the river and running back to the den.
When they were specks, Steven came over and looked at Raven with sorrowful eyes. He picked her up with his humongous jaws and carried her over to his den. When they both were in his den, he started to lick her wound. Raven was really weak because she lost a lot of blood. When he tried to help her, she looked at him with pleasant eyes. She licked his face as if she where saying, thank you. When her wound looked a little better, he laid down next to her and just watched as she went to sleep. When Raven was asleep, he went to go and get something for her to eat. When Steven walked out of the den, he saw a buck standing on the other side of a tree just a little ways away from the den.
He crept up on it, got ready to pounce, and got the deer to fall down, then broke its windpipe and dismembered its bloody carcass. Once he got hold of a leg, he ripped it off and took it back to his den. When Steven pranced in, he saw that Raven had woken up, and was licking her wounded leg. When he walked towards her, she looked at him with famished eyes. He gave her the leg that was dangling from his mouth, and she wanted to share it with him. When Raven and Steven where done, they both slept until the next morning.
Chapter Three: Unwelcome Guest.
The next morning, Raven and Steven went hunting together and killed a buck deer. What Raven planned to do was to give the deer to her pack, and maybe they would let Steven into the pack. When Raven was just a little bit in front of the den, Kyle, Mike, Katrina, Billy, Tick, Grace, Stacy, and Tyler came out and sat in front of the den in a single file line, growling at Steven. Of course Steven wasn’t very afraid of the pack, because he is really big. When Steven dropped the deer in front of Mike, Mike howled and the rest of the pack pulled it into the den. Mike didn’t go in because Kyle and Raven were still outside of the den. Mike looked at Steven, wrestled him, and let him go. When Raven saw this, she jumped with joy, and licked Mikes face and then went over to Steven and did similar. Kyle didn’t like the idea that he would have to share the den with an outsider, but had to live with the rules. When Kyle went back into the den, Raven and Steven just sat outside of the den staring at each other, until Steven jumped onto Raven and started to bite her ears gently. She flipped him over and pulled his tail with her teeth. They both smiled at each other as they played. When they were tuckered out, they laid down and dreamed together. When they both had woken up, Raven started to look for her sisters. She wanted to introduce them to Steven. When she had finally found them playing on top of the den, she barked and they came down. When Stacy and Grace seen him they were filled with joy. They tackled him and played with him. But then Mike howled and everyone ran to him. Raven and Steven where the last to arrive. When everyone was in front of Mike, he howled once more and everyone ran to the open meadow. What Raven and Steven didn’t realize was, was that they were going to start training for when they have to compete for food in winter, which was only a few weeks off. After the intense training, Raven had grown to be a full grown wolf, same with her brother, sisters, and Steven. When they were full grown, winter had arrived.
It started to snow, and food was abundant. Katrina started to get sick and so did Mike. So it was up to the rest of the pack to bring down the food. There was only two remaining deer herds left in the area, so the pack had to move fast before anyone else would get the deer. Kyle had been practicing this, so he was the leader until Mike got better. Then the pack ran with lightning speed down to the fields that the deer ate at. Raven got ahead of everyone else, and saw something she would never forget….it was a herd of white-tail deer. She had never seen anything that looked so luscious in her life. When the rest of the pack had caught up to her, they saw the deer. The pack was in stalking position, then when one of the deer either saw them or smelt them, they would attack. Luckily, the pack were down wind from the herd. There were only eight wolves, but they had strength and cunning speed on their side. But the thing was, was that the deer had speed also. So the pack split into two groups, Raven took: Grace, Tyler, and Steven. Kyle took: Stacy, Billy, and Tick. The two groups went to both sides of the herd, being careful not to disturb any twigs or startle the deer. When Raven and Kyle had seen the deer that they wanted to kill, they started to run towards them. When the deer saw this, they fled for all they were worth. Kyle and his group pounced onto two deer with bad legs and ripped chunks of flesh off of the deer when they were still alive. While Kyle’s group was doing that, Ravens group took down three deer since Steven could handle one on his own. Raven jumped on one of the deer and made it fall down, while Grace bit down on its windpipe. Raven looked up to see Tyler and Steven corralling one deer into some bushes. When they got hold of the deer, Steven chucked it around like a rag doll. Since Kyle only got two deer and Raven’s group got three, it was a portion that the pack would savor for a couple of weeks. When they all got back to the den, Mike and Katrina had gotten a little better. So the whole pack took their individual deer carcass and dismembered it, and eating it with pleasure. Mike and Katrina shared one, Steven and Raven shared one, Kyle and Billy shared one, Grace and Stacy shared one, and Tyler and Tick shared one. Just the right amount of deer carcasses to feed the entire pack. When the pack was done, Kyle grabbed a bone and started to gnaw on it to get the meat out of his teeth.
The pack had got done eating when it started to snow harder then ever. The pack just went to the back of the den and went to sleep. But Raven, just had to look at the snow, and play in it for one thing. So she got up quietly and snuck over to the entrance to the den. When she was at the entrance, she stepped out into the snow and started to get used to it. When the snow hit her face, she wiped her face with her paw. She thought the snow was glorious, so she began to roll around in it and played with snowflakes about to hit the ground. She looked as though she was a puppy again. Her fun had gotten even better when Steven had woken up. Raven didn’t see him get up. When Raven was rolling around in the snow, Steven pounced onto her and started to lick her face in excitement. They both played in the snow until it was a few hours past. When Raven had gotten bored, she decided to go and play near the river. Now the river was frozen when she got there, but that didn’t stop her from playing on it. When Steven was about to get on, when the he realized that he had fallen in last winter, and it was really difficult to get out. So he paced on the tip of the ice right next to Raven and was whimpering as if he were saying, please, get off. Suddenly, the ice shattered and Raven fell in, the only thing that kept her up was a piece of ice that she was clenching onto with her paws. When Steven saw this, he didn’t care about falling in anymore, he just wanted to save Raven. He ran over to her, she was slipping. He was careful to not fall in himself, he tried to pull her up by the scruff, but it was useless. Then he thought of something that might save her. He barked, turned around and then she grabbed onto his tail and he pulled her up as fast as he could. When she was up and out of the water, he pulled her to his den, which was only a little ways away. When they got there, he started to lick and smother her so that she would get warm again. When Raven got a little bit dryer, he smothered her with his whole body to make her warm even more. When it was morning, Steven herd a howl in the wind, he suspected that it was their pack calling for them. When he went to the dens entrance, Kyle came in to great him and Raven. Actually he didn’t really great Steven, he just greeted Raven. When she saw that Kyle and Steven weren’t fighting each other, she was thrilled. When she got up, the three of them left and walked across the river despite Raven falling in the nigh before, and headed back to the packs den. When they all arrived, Mike, Katrina and the others were happy to see Raven. When Steven came up to Raven, he licked her face, then she licked his in delight. Then Raven had noticed something very different about Tick, when he looked at her, he had disappointment in his eyes. Raven didn’t care what he thought about Steven and her. They were best friends.
The whole pack was getting hungry when they had smelled a few deer a couple miles away. The pack decided to go hunting together before they would hunt the ultimate animal. The only thing that they had to do was to train a bit, to know how to bring it down. One problem, nobody knew how to take one down, except Mike, and that was a long time ago. The animal that they had to go and kill, so that the pack could maintain there territory is a Black Bear. So when the pack headed for the herd of deer, Mike split the pack into two parties. The males in one, and the females in the other. When the pack was about to get into position to start the slaughter, something caught Ravens eye. She didn’t know what it was, but it made a loud noise when it walked. It sounded like thunder, when the animal opened its jaws. Raven decided to go and investigate what the animal was. When Raven was about to creep up on the animal, it scared her.
Chapter Four: Help Me!
Raven jumped up and started to growl at the animal, then she backed off. She saw that it was just a few baby bears. She saw that it was just a few baby bears. What Raven didn’t realize was, was that mother bears are not far off. When Raven was about to leave, the mother bear charged at Raven. The bear knocked Raven down and started to swipe at her with her big paws. When Raven was getting brutally she managed to howl, and her pack came running to save her. When the pack arrived, everyone started to jump onto the bear, and tried to get it off of Raven. When Steven started to bite ferociously, the bear ran off with her cubs. When the bear was taken care of, the pack turned their attention to Raven. She didn’t look very good, she had huge blood spots on her. Then Steven grabbed her again, in his big jaws, and dragged her back to the den. When the pack had gotten back to the den, everyone pitched in to get Raven back on her feet, and ready to go. It took a few days for her to regain strength and heal. When she was fully recovered, the pack decided that it was time for Raven to have a pack of her own. Mike walked over to Raven and gave her a farewell. Not only Raven got to go, Kyle and her sisters got to leave and make their own packs. When Raven was walking out of the den, she looked over her shoulder and started to remember all of the good times she had had there. Playing with her friends, and her brother and sisters, and her pack. Growing up, meeting Steven again, and hunting. But now, its her turn to pass everything she knows, to her own pack and pups.
When Raven turned back around, she began in a trot, and went in search of a new home. She crossed the meadow where the deer graze and felt as if she was finally free. When she got to the other side of the meadow, she walked around to see if there were any none vacant dens. When she finally found one, it was a beautiful location. A small stream ran on the left side of the den. There where trees everywhere, and the den was on a small hill. There where flowers everywhere too. She walked into the den and looked at it. It was perfect, big enough for two packs. When she decided that she liked it, she howled(declaring that this was her den now). Just a little bit after that, she heard another howl, she listened. It was Steven! He was coming. She didn’t believe it, she thought that he would have stayed with her old pack, or create his own. What Raven didn’t know was, was that he was closer then she had thought. She seen him cross the meadow and run to her den. When they seen each other again, they licked each others face in happiness. A few months had passed, and Raven was expecting pups of her own. Since Raven and Steven where the alpha’s, they needed the rest of their pack. They needed a hunting party. Raven had gotten really fat and was in no shape to go and look for members. So, Steven walked over to Raven and licked her face and walked to the dens entrance, looked back over his shoulder, looked at Raven in happiness, and then left. Raven was worried that she would have her puppies, and no one would be there to protect her and her newborn pups. Raven would be too tired to try and fight off anything that could harm them. Then she had herd something, she turned her head to the dens entrance and saw Grace with an outstanding looking wolf she had with her. They walked in and licked Ravens face with joy. The third one Raven saw come in after them was Steven, he got them to come and join their pack, it was a joyous afternoon for Raven. Then Steven walked back out in search of more wolves. When he finally came back, he brought with him seven other wolves that were kicked out of their packs, or were trying to find one. Their pack was mostly dark colored. Not to mention that the pack was complete. They had seven females, and four males in their pack. Raven was expecting even more wolves because she was expecting her pups soon.
The day came when she had her puppies, totaled up to ten. Makes a total of twenty one wolves. She was thrilled and so was the rest of the pack. Everyone snuggled the puppies. Raven finally go to go to sleep and relax. All of the pups were white. It was very unusual, but Raven didn’t care. She loved her pups. Steven loved them so much that he would take care of them when Raven was asleep. Six females, and four males where in her litter. It would be a months before Raven could leave the den. When the pups got bigger, Raven felt a little overwhelmed by them. When the pups got old enough that Raven could take them outside, the pups were so curious. When the pups were old enough for a sitter to watch them, Raven finally got to go hunting with her pack again. The one who stayed was Grace. The other twenty wolves went hunting together. Since it was Spring, food was plentiful. When the pack came up on a few large herds of deer, they attacked in a arrow type position. Half the pack took one side and the other half took the other. When the whole pack had seen some deer that were wounded or that were big, they attacked. Few deer got away from the jaws of the mercifulness wolves jaws.
 Caged Demon666 · Wed Jun 21, 2006 @ 06:42pm · 7 Comments |
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