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i finished my drawing of a ninja today.
ok so here is my newest poem. made it off te top of my head.
and pplz do not copy saying that you did this. cuz that just shows that you have no imaganation wut so ever.


The air thickens with the poison it holds. The trees wither as the claws of the beast choke them to their deaths... I feel the musk upon my nose. I like my, teethe. My ears pull back for I can not bear to hear the cry’s of the earth... OUR MOTHER. Her pain is our pain. Her rage is our rage... and as I lift my head and look upon the bright lights of the scabs... dwelling of the rage... I feel the fur on my neck and back erect. My talons poised. My teeth bared... I can stand it no longer. THE BEAST HAS BEEN RELEASED. I unleash my full rage...and unto the depths of the enemy's I fee. Savage eyes I shun upon them... fill their soles with terror... it's the incredible strength of the wrath I feel in my heart... the pressure of the blood upon my face. But I shall return when the time is right....---- and another will be chosen. My soul is now at Pease... but my instinct hungers once again... when Luna speaks to me with the blaze of her light. When the desire of savagery, THE HUNGER, THE HATRED RUNS THROUGH MY VEINS... it is then when I release the beast............. I shall rage........ The beast will awaken again.

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unrealfan11
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 17, 2007 @ 03:42pm
wow... learn to spell.


commentCommented on: Wed Jan 17, 2007 @ 03:48pm
Daniel be nice. It might have bad spelling, but it has a big meaning.



fuzykittykat
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DaCoOkEr09
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 29, 2007 @ 05:26am
i love the poem its very nice and you can write poems, and you need to write more. and also daniel be nice, i bet you don't have perfect spelling grammer.


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