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these poems are just ok.
Your baby boy. (poem)
Today I woke up,and you weren't there,
I miss you so much,it makes me despair.
I know one day we will sit together,
Love from the heart,lasting forever.
I know you love me,and we are great friends,
But i love you all,until my very bitter end.
This is love,to everyone,but especially you,
I hope this changes all of your veiws.
If you're a friend,you know you have my heart,
but if we were lovers,we would never part.
I wish i could wake up to see your beautiful face,
you keep me alive,but i want to leave this place.
You all have my heart,and carry me on,
without you,my friends I wouldn't live on.
One stands out,and baby you know who you are,
without your support,I wouldn't make it very far.
Everyone knows who I am,and what I beleive,
evryone that is,except I don't know me.
If I leave this world alone and misserable today,
I want you all to know,I love you the same way.
If I could make you all happy,and full of joy,
I would, signed sincerely by, Your baby boy!






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Something_Something_Thing
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 26, 2006 @ 09:51pm
Good Job, I love it!!!


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 26, 2006 @ 11:34pm
i love you and would do anything to make you happy for a change. and yes i get the poem and i'm changing the subject a little, Always



psychichotic
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Dark-Witch_Pixy
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 27, 2006 @ 01:08pm
Wow, you have a way with words. I love this poem, I really do. I hardly have words to describe it. You have a gift, don't EVER let anyone tell you otherwise.


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 12:28am
very good nox
its a really good one



ta2tigger
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purple!_angel
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commentCommented on: Tue Nov 28, 2006 @ 07:56pm
xd that's one of the finest poems i've read. my friend la_rena told me you were good and she was right you rock xd


commentCommented on: Wed Jan 17, 2007 @ 01:09am
i like the flow of it.
quite good



thescherer
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skaterpunk19_1
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 26, 2007 @ 04:02pm
this is a poem that wouldve been great like six months ago when i broke with my ex and met my almost fiancee but anyway i love this poem great job dont stop writing


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 08, 2007 @ 03:44pm
I love this poem. It's so emotional and yet, in a way, inspiring. Keep up the good work!



Tioky
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