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~Dreams of Eternity~
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Death's Reign (poem)
In somber reign does grief endure Its leaden chain to pain secure With rusted links that will ensure Such evil lure, such evil lure Its darkened hue when curtains fall To cast on me life's bitter pall I hear the drone, the echoed call Death wants it all, yes, wants it all The sharpened edge my grief has honed Now grates loudly, my soul, like stone Lo! Death has reared himself a throne I feel alone, so much alone I must undo and thus begin To make amends for brooding sin And find the light that dwells within Death will not win! It cannot win!






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` htaeD
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 04:48am
Oh, wow. Now that is a poem! I bet your one of the most greatest poets here on Gaia!!! ^^


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 04:50am
Damn. That is all that I can say...lol



Predetermined Fate
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Life v.s. Death
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 04:52am
Deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppp. lol =P


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 04:53am
One of your greatest, yet!!! <3



`~Lady Kira~`
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Misfortunate One
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 04:58am
And yet again, your words astound me. You're a very pure hearted individual. I see that you are not tainted with the eyes of truth. ^_^


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 05:01am
Profound, as usual. You never cease to amaze me. ^^



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JackTraitor
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 05:04am
Every thing has a fear even death remember that and you will always win trust me it helps when death comes to you and asks for your hand but if it is you it fears it will pull back its hand in pain and you shal live.


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 07:12am
Death huh.Interesting poem you have created. I liked the last part "Death will not win! It cannot win!" I hope that whatever is happening to you or causing you to write such beautiful things, it changes so you can write poems about life instead.



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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 07:59am
Wow! That's deep and it sounds like a puzzle poem to something that should be in one of the Silent Hill Games. ^^


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 11:59pm
if you wrote this them AMAZING job!



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