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ok, i don't update this alot so, you all will be able to enjoy (or critique or ridicule) what i have written for my arena entry. .............................................................................................................................just read the story, then judge me. . At first glance, anyone would believe that Alan and Jody were a happy couple. They had been together since childhood and any moron could tell you that they were just "meant to be together ". Jody obviously felt that Alan was "the One". That through thick and thin, they were always meant to be together. Alan, on the other hand, had other plans... You see, the reason Alan stayed with Jody for so many years was because she had a wealthy family and he didn't. He hated being poor and hated her for being so rich. So, from the not-so-tender age seven, he came up with a plan to rob her of her riches. If she were to die unexpectedly, the police wouldn't believe that he killed her. After all, he was "the love of her life". She also wasn't to popular with too many of the locals. And if the police ever did figure out it was him, why, he would long gone by then. Sad little Jody even made up a living will, just for him, bequeathing everything she owned to him and only him. Everything was falling in to place for Alan. . On the very day of the wedding, after the "I Do's", just as Jody and Alan made their way out of the church, amidst the joy and happiness, there hid a trained and very well paid assassin. He blended in with the trees and bushes surrounding the area, careful not to be heard or seen. He waited patiently for the signal. Alan closed his eyes then raised both of his arms and shouted "I LOVE THIS WOMAN!". What seemed like out of nowhere, Jody was hit with a giant ninja star. With Jody's last breath, she whispered into Alan's ear "i'll......alw....ays...lov...e......y..o....u.....". Alan put a finger to her lips and smiled and then whispered back "I never loved you". Jody's face twisted with horror and great sorrow before she completely died. No one saw it coming (except Alan).................................................................. ..................................................................................................................... so, what did you all think of it?

ezziearticuno
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Commented on: Mon Mar 12, 2007 @ 10:37pm


	wow....thats awesome! fits your avy in the arena to a tee! if only it would fit in the description box.... crying

Commented on: Mon Mar 12, 2007 @ 11:01pm


	It's the best story I'd ever seen. Wow.

Convoluted Logic
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Anime_flame
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Commented on: Mon Mar 12, 2007 @ 11:02pm


	crying so sad

Commented on: Tue Mar 13, 2007 @ 12:43am


	gee it was gettin good until u killed her!_! sweatdrop jk lol gr8 story heart crying sad tho

Doll_Face_101
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njrocker
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Commented on: Tue Mar 13, 2007 @ 03:07am


	Heart wrenching but i likey. 3nodding

Commented on: Tue Mar 13, 2007 @ 03:13am


	thats an awesome story... so sad... crying

DeN-DeN17
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Hokage_Haruko
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Commented on: Tue Mar 13, 2007 @ 04:06am


	That was so sad

Commented on: Tue Mar 13, 2007 @ 11:57am


	crying It was sad

Laynadox
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[-coffee_cake-]
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Commented on: Tue Mar 13, 2007 @ 11:47pm


	wow... >: D

Commented on: Wed Mar 14, 2007 @ 05:17pm


	Wow!!!! That is sad but very good. 3nodding

Red_Fox00
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MKrox
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Commented on: Wed Mar 14, 2007 @ 11:19pm


	neato story.

Commented on: Thu Mar 15, 2007 @ 04:47am


	Wow, it's sad. D:

Krubbie
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shackle57
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Commented on: Thu Mar 15, 2007 @ 06:24pm


	poor girl but i like the story but it made me cry xd xd

Commented on: Thu Mar 15, 2007 @ 08:24pm


	Very sad crying

Jennieta
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darkneko9023
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Commented on: Thu Mar 15, 2007 @ 08:54pm


	it's so good u should get money 4 it!

Commented on: Fri Mar 16, 2007 @ 05:14am


	nice story

numberonepuppy
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LittleNikkiOfLight
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Commented on: Fri Mar 16, 2007 @ 08:13pm


	... Waaaah! so sad! (but good!) cries

Commented on: Sat Mar 17, 2007 @ 04:39am


	-crys- that is so sad how could alen b so greedy 2 go 2 kill the girl he so called loved! i mean she loved him how could he just go and kill her >.<

4ever-neko-angel
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t o x i c ` k i s s
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Commented on: Sat Mar 17, 2007 @ 06:32pm


	I love the story! so sad ...

Commented on: Sat Mar 17, 2007 @ 06:46pm


	awsome That rocks amazing

Priestress of darkness
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[Tainted Soul]
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Commented on: Sat Mar 17, 2007 @ 10:00pm


	Made me cry. SO sad. crying

Commented on: Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 03:27am


	I love ur avi, i love ur story. Poor Jody sad

rebelforfr33dom
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creamedstrawberry
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Commented on: Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 09:33pm


	best story ever but sooo sad. cry cry cry cry cry cry cry crying crying crying crying crying crying crying

Commented on: Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 10:21pm


	Nice but the ninja star was kindof random >..<

Talee-Chan
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EvFaerAshlynn
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Commented on: Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 10:35pm


	DAY-YUM. Ouch. Poor Jody...

Commented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 02:34am


	I know how jody feels..being betrayed by the one she loved. realle good story

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