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Stars Lead the Way (Prolouge)
This is a story I have called Stars Lead the Way. I will only keep posting with your comments and good rates. No flaming, please.

Stars Lead the Way
blue_crystal_girl


Leaves crunched under her shoes as she ran. The girl with strawberry blonde hair and honey colored eyes ran though the woods. The only thing she had with her was her backpack full of her belongings.

"Far away," she gasped. "I need to get far away from here. As far as I can!"

The girl ran out of the trees and stumbled in her feet. She balanced herself and walked. The stream flowed beside her path. The currents moved in the opposite direction that she was walking.

A tune from her cell phone rang through her ears. The girl pulled the phone out of her pocket and answered, putting it up to her ear.

"Gina! Where are you?" another girl yelled on the other end. "What are you doing?"

"Meg, I can't stay at home," the girl called Gina replied. "It's a living hell there."

"But Gina-"

"Meg, I know what I'm doing! It's what's best!" Gina yelled into the phone. She hung up and stuffed her phone back into her pocket before running down the path. Her backpack bounced on her back in protest, as if telling her to stop running.

Well, that is the prolouge. I will not post again until I get at least three or five replies. If they are good replies, I will post the next chapter.

Please tell me if there are any grammer problems.

Thank you for reading.






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born2surf
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 10, 2007 @ 07:36pm
Ooh...I really like the story so far (if you're wondering I myself am sort of a writer who normal visits The Crushed and am struggling with a personal narrative of my own) although I think you could add a little more information about the setting and the character, even if its the prolouge. Good luck with life!


commentCommented on: Tue Mar 27, 2007 @ 10:05pm
Well, i didn't spot any grammar problems, and i would really like to see whats next!



Kinataa
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Randomette
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 08, 2007 @ 05:35pm
Thank you readers!

As soon as I can, I will post the first chapter!

Just be on the look out! I may post it in a different post or on this one.


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