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The Prophecy part 1: The Beggining By Zelda_Master101
Prologue Allen’s Dream “Must reach Everest summit, must get Richter Club. Or at least water.” Allen Dunnem said exhaustedly climbing the face of the mountain. Allen was trying to get the legendary weapon, the Richter Club; with it you would be able to control all earthly substances. Allen was already a jerky teenager, if he got the club he would be completely evil and undefeatable. “Almost there, about to get my dream, into REALITY.” Allen screamed to the heavens. Allen finally reached the top of the mountain but saw the club nowhere. “I wonder,” Allen murmured. Allen was different from all other people on earth at that time. He could control Earth. He had the ability to shift rock and tumble stones but the club would give him enough power to make earthquakes. Allen raised his hands into the air and the mountain start to have a hole being welted through it. So basically Allen was digging into the mountain. He jumped into the hole and saw absolutely nothing as he descended down the mountain. Now however there was no mountain to need to dig through. There was a light ahead so Allen ran to see if it was his dream ahead. However instead of seeing the Richter Club he saw a Tomar. A Tomar is an ancient guardian of the Earthly substance. At the sight of these dark red rhinos that stand only on the hind legs who have six powerful arms Allen prepared to fight. “Bring it on you retarded pigs.” Allen said to him. The Tomar charged at Allen with all his power. Allen quickly grabbed the Tomars horn and chucked across the cave so he slammed into the walls. The impact of this 2 ton beast against the inner walls causes the mountain to start falling. Allen lost all focus on the Tomar and started to try to hold the mountain. He lifted some of the earth in Everest and crushed the Tomar. He continued walking until he found his dream. BANG! Allen had been knocked out by a falling rock. A few days later he wakes up. The impact knocked the club into his hands. “Uh, Richter feel funny; wait why Richter talk like retarded people. Wait, Richter holding Richter Club. Now the new name of me is Richter.” Richter said. Suddenly Richter burst out of the mountain and screamed “RICHTER FOUR”, as soon as he landed his club slammed the ground and the Richter scale measured a level four earthquake. He went on a rampage and destroyed all in his way. The last place Richter was seen was Thailand causing a level 10 earthquake. After that he vanished never to be seen again. Or that’s what everyone thought. Chapter 1 AJ Baed 30 years later “AJ, you are about to miss the bus. This is our first day of High School.” My friend Mark yelled. “Shut up Mark I know that” I screamed back. I am a fifteen year old blonde boy who has a really hard time making friends. I live in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, on a little street near Atbrine High School. When I finally arrived at school Mark and AJ went to try AJ’s locker. “9, 15, 6.”Clang “I got it, I hope.” My locker flew open. Later at lunch Mark and I had no where to sit. We saw a girl sitting alone at a table. “Hey would you mind if we sat here.” I asked the girl. “Uh no not at all.” She answered. “Uh my name is Serenity.” The girl told us. “Mine is AJ and this is Mark.” So the three of us just sat there talking. Then this freaky Goth kid comes and randomly sits there. “I’m Kyle.” The kid says in a really creepy way. “Uh huh, and I’m Mark. This is AJ and Serenity.” Mark answered. “Ah, whatever, do you really think anyone cares for that loser Serenity?” Kyle said to us. “Well she is really hot and she’s a nice person.” Mark answered. Kyle rolled his eyes and went back to eating. Then this really big and strong kid walks up to us. “And let me guess are you an outcast named Allen or something.” Mark asked immediately. “Well, my name is Allen. But no I have tons of friends.” Allen pointed over to the far table and there sat some of the meanest looking seniors ever. “Oh, so you are one of them.” Mark frightfully murmured. Thankfully the lunch bell rang and then me and the other three outcasts ran. Now it was time for the classes to take a personality survey. After class a girl came up to me and said “My name is Ollie Eve, listen to me, I checked out this book about a week ago and really don’t like it. Would you like the book?” “Uh, why.” I asked. “Well, I don’t like books about reality, so I think you would and do, don’t you AJ Baed.” Ollie said to me. “Well, alright, but how do you…” I stopped because the girl was gone. I looked to my feet and saw the book lying there. I read the title: “THE PROPHECY: By Ollie Eve” I looked at the book in confusion. Then I had a sudden urge to run to Mark. So I shrugged and ran over to show Mark the book. “Hey Mark look at this book this girl named Olli gave to me.” I yelled to him. “Huh, “THE PROPHECY: BY OLLIE EVE” weird, isn’t Ollie the name of the girl who gave it to you?” Mark answered. “Yeh and she said she doesn’t like reality books, but she wrote it.” I said to Mark. Mark nodded and walked with me to the closet. We turned the light on and started reading… Chapter 2 The Prophecy The book started: “I will be mentioning a lot of names that you won’t know, or understand so just go along with it okay. Now, a long time ago an ancient power witch was split between 19 ultimate beings. However one of those beings was stronger than the others beyond all belief. When she was created however she didn’t breathe. She didn’t do anything. The others thought she was dead. So before she woke up the others used their power to place her into the center of the earth. Once Voorcol used his voodoo moves to put an eternal curse on the body of Ollie they forgot about her completely. They spread themselves along the universe never to meet again. They split into the EVIL and GOOD which created the sins. If they were ever to meet again it would break out in war. Eventually 17 of them did meet again. They broke into “The Eternal War”. Soon after “The Eternal War” began the 17th person returned to stop the fighting. He was a shadow being. (A good yet dead person, with an evil personality.) He raised his pitch black hands and screamed: “Enough, stop fighting, now.” Immediately they halted. With a grin on his face he walked away mumbling the following: “Now to keep the fighting at due I shall banish them all never to re-meet until evil is once again a major conduct in the universe. Now banished humanoids I create 12 planets in the remote universe of Extitian. Aquari, Flash Flare, Temmeniea, Ablondo, Mercury, Earth, Mars, Saturn, Pluto, Hell, Venus, and Jupiter are the forbidden planets. And for myself, a new planet. The unnamed where all creatures that have partially died can live. It is to be located on the farthest point in the universe. If you ever re-meet it will be once again GOOD vs. EVIL. Now be gone.” With that everyone was spread not to ever see each other again. Three of those people lost their memories of everything that happened. Two died. One was turned to solid rock. One was put into the center of the Earth. The rest know everything. Now, one of those people who had died was Corry Baed. It is said that none of this will re-happen until one of his descendants finally gets to read this book. He is to find four of the GOOD people to take with him: 1. Heroin of Aquari 2. Heroin of Temmeniea 3. Hero of Flash Flare 4. The SHADOW BEING! Once he finds them and trains with them he will be strong enough to defeat the returned evil. His name is A…J…B…A…E…D…” AJ stopped reading the book. He looked over to Mark and saw his gaze was aw at the book. It turns out Mark thought that the book was finished; it looked that way to everyone that wasn’t a part of the prophecy. AJ tried reading the remaining part of the prophecy aloud to Mark. As AJ read Mark could see AJ’s mouth moving but heard no sound coming from his mouth. This piece of the prophecy said: “This section is for the eyes of the descendants of the original members of the prophecy. Eventually you will no longer see this part of the prophecy. Now, you will eventually meet every person in this prophecy. The people you will meet have great power, far greater than yours the good ones will help you so listen to there words. The new generation is even more powerful than the old one, you will meet them all, befriend all but one. Now, the first person you will meet will be from the wondrous world of Aquari, her name will be Serenity, listen to Serenity, she will teach you everything there is to know about the healing process. She knows all about the body, both male and female, she knows how to stay healthy and to replenish health with amazing speed, quality, and taste. The second person you will meet is from the screwed up world of Temmeniea. She is named Warp, listen to Warp, she will teach you everything there is to know about speed and acceleration. She knows all about the human’s respiratory system, and how to keep your endurance levels at the maximum, she also knows the best ways to accelerate and maintain speeds greater and faster than time itself, without the great speed, pressure, and friction destroying your body like it tends to do. The third person you will meet will be from the hot and destructive world of Flash Flare. He will be named Max, listen to Max, he will teach you all there is to know about human strength. He knows all about the muscular system and how to keep your body fit at ready to fight, he also knows how to stop yourself from getting too lazy, how to fight with great strength, and how to overcome yours and your opponents weaknesses. The forth and final main person you will meet will be from the unknown planet of Shadow Life. His name will be Shade, Listen to Shade. Shade is a shadow being, so he is full of psychic knowledge and power, he knows absolutely everything there is to know about anything, do not question him, Shade is a greatly powerful being who could easily destroy us all! With the combined knowledge of these four great creatures you shall be a worthy leader, you must obey them, not as of slavery terms yet as a faithful companion. Now I do place the fate of the universe in the hands of you five very capable warriors. Do not fail, if that is to happen you could not guess the terrors of which will overcome us all.” AJ slammed the book shut and turned to Mark. “Uh, this can’t be true; it’s just a book, a stupid little book.” AJ said to him. Mark looked at AJ. “No, it’s not stupid. It could be true. Let me read a little more. PLEASE.” Mark said back. AJ handed him the book. Mark sat there staring at it. “Well this says that to find the portal to Aquari you need to go to the DEMONS MANSION in Grand Rapids, Michigan. I have heard or the DEMONS MANSION. It is supposed to be cursed.” Mark said to AJ. AJ rolled his eyes and tried explaining to Mark that he didn’t believe in curses. Mark shook his head. “Dude do you know how many times you thought something was cursed for no good reason? For one you thought that because Carmen in second grade was being nice to us that she had been cursed. Get it; you do so believe in curses.” Mark explained to AJ. AJ snarled and started to walk away. “Hey, where are you going?” Mark asked. “Well, to the DEMONS MANSION.”AJ answered. Mark smiled, but at the same time started to cry. “Mark listen I won’t forget you. And listen because you are my best friend I’ll write to you every chance I get, but can’t send them ‘til I can teleport stuff. Don’t worry, I won’t forget. Oh… and tell Serenity for me and call in an hour at my house see what she says.” AJ explained. Chapter 3 Preparation Later when I got home I got a call from Mark. “So what did Serenity say?” AJ asked Mark. “Um, well, nobody knows where she is, she disappeared completely. And get this; I looked up Serenity Amiees in all earth sources I could get my hands on. And there was nothing about her except that she has been seen in inter-galactic activity; they think she is an otherworldly criminal.” Mark explained. I stood there speechless. “Uh, Mark I heard what you said but listen I don’t need to know this right now. I have to tell my mom and get packed. So I’ll see you later alright.” I said in an annoyed way. “Yeh, but later could be anytime in the next 89 years.” Mark said sadly then hung up the phone. I started to actually cry. I went to go tell my mom. “Mom, I have big news for you. Listen I got this book from school, it’s called the “THE PROPHECY” it says my actual name and it says I’m the descendant of a great ancient being named Corry Baed. So basically I need to go through the universe to find his ancient friends and unite them again to be able to stop the villains of Accrue and save the world. I need to go to the DEMONS MANSION, in Grand Rapids, Michigan. So listen could we call our taxi driver to bring me up there. While I’m getting ready to go I need to say good bye to all of my friends and our family. So what do you say, could I do it please.” I said quickly. “Listen AJ I knew this would eventually happen I remember your great grandfather Corry, he had great power. He eventually was killed by a class mate of his named Allen Dunnem. He had a great power in his blood also; he claims to have been trapped in the middle of the universe in a small rock. I never wanted you to find out about his old life, because I knew you would want to do the same and I don’t want to see you dead from those wicked creatures. However... now that you know I guess I have no choice but to let you do it. Find his old friend Serenity first and she will be able to help you out.” My mom confessed. Unfortunately I was in aw. Finally I shook my head yes and walked slowly over to my room. While I was walking I was thinking about my great grandfather’s friend Serenity, I thought “Well she must be pretty old if she knew an ancient worrier.” Eventually I lost that thought. I entered my room and turned on my blackish blue speaker phone. “Hey Mark, sorry for being snappy earlier on but I needed to know if mom would approve.” “Yeh and did she?” Mark answered. “Well apparently she knew the whole time, she knows Corry Baed. Isn’t that weird.” I answered. “Are you serious, what a jerky secret to keep away from some sort of god type person?” Mark answered back. I shrugged and said to Mark that I had to get ready to go. I hung up the phone and went to get some stuff I thought I might need on the trip. “Well mom, all packed, so now can we call our taxi driver.” I asked his mom. “Soon, now listen AJ, I’m going to talk a lot for a second so if you need to say something now say it.” She paused. “Okay well I guess not. Now AJ listen do you understand all of the responsibility that comes with this challenge. I wish you the best of luck. But you will meet people that right now may seem impossible to defeat. You will learn to stop all threats that come your way. Eventually you will learn to use the power in your veins to your full potential. You will meet great people with the power you need to stop this, listen to them, they are smarter, stronger, faster, and have better health than any ordinary human. In the end you will feel a lot better about yourself and better about everything around you. My advice is to stay behind those stronger than you until you feel confident enough to help out. They may not like you at first because of your species. But they will learn to appreciate your unique abilities. You are not an average human, your better. Believe that. I LOVE YOU.” My mom said nervously but seriously. “I get it mom there are both good and bad creatures in the universe. I can handle them both. Thanks” I briefly repeated. My mom smiled and got out the phone. She dialed the number of our special taxi driver. “He will be here in half an hour so be ready outside.” My mom told me quietly. I nodded and slowly walked away. While I was walking I started wondering if this was good idea. Really do you think I would have an easy time leaving my friends and family for the rest of eternity? I don’t think so. Anyway, back to the story. I walked back to my mom. “I don’t think I can do this, I can’t leave you and Mark forever.” I sobbed out. “Me, I’ll be fine. And your friend Mark, well you and Mark will both learn something different about him.” My mother answered with confidence. With that I walked off. “I love you mom.” I shouted. “Love you to” She answered. Chapter 4 The Trip I walked outside and waited for the taxi driver. Eventually he showed up. “Hello, where are you headed to any way?” The taxi driver asked. “Well you may think this is stupid but, um, the DEMONS MANSION.” I hesitantly answered. “Well, you can’t be serious; nobody has ever entered the DEMONS MANSION or even gone on the property since a little girl disappeared in the mansion. But, okay if you’re serious I guess I could take you. Get in and listen to everything I say on the way there.” The driver answered. I got into the taxi and before I knew it I was away and onto the biggest journey of my life. I still had doubt about this. And what did my mother mean by “We will both find something new about Mark.” That’s just absurd. I smelled a terrible smell in the interior of his taxi. It was a mix of fruit, cologne, hair spray, and old food. “Ugh, what is that smell?” I asked even though I knew perfectly. “Well, that ain’t any of your business, now is it?” The rude driver answered. I smirked. I turned to see my house as we got much farther away from it. I think that it only took about a minute for the house to go completely out of site. I think he was speeding Anyway, he wouldn’t stop giving me this odd glare, like he wanted to hurt me. I knew he wouldn’t have the guts to hurt me and because of that I kept teasing him. “You do know that if your wife were to actually smell that cologne it would kill her on the first sniff.” I teased. Now, I know that may seem childish, but what the heck, I don’t care, it was still fun. So I continued doing that. He was getting really angry now, with all of the rude comments I made to him. I think it was a few more times of making fun of him when he finally snapped. “SHUT UP YOU RETARDED KID, PLEASE JUST SHUT UP.” He screamed at me. “Dude keep your eyes on the wheel.” I told him screaming. I was screaming because the car was going out of control. What was there to do? I was so panicking when I shoved the driver out of the way and hopped up into the front driver’s seat. I tried to get the vehicle under control, but it crashed against a telephone pole and the driver went flying through the windshield. I ran out of the taxi actually concerned if he were alright. “Are you okay?” I asked him. “Well, um I don’t think so kid. I could use some help.” He told me. So I walled over and tried to lift him up and put him into the car. He was extremely heavy, I don’t see how I managed to do this but hey, I did. I got him in and tried pushing the car to a nearby gas station. It was way too heavy. I got into the car and called the emergency hospital. “Hello I need an ambulance here as so as you can do it.” I yelled into the phone. “Wow, listen, settle down little boy, just tell us what happened, okay.” The man on the phone told me. “Well, he flew through our windshield. I managed to get him into the car, but the car is almost completely destroyed.” I told them. “Okay, we may just bring a tow-truck for the car.” The man told me. “Thanks. Can you bring a spare taxi?” I asked. The people finally arrived about 20 minutes later. They took a look at my driver. “Listen, kid he will be just fine, we will tow the truck and we aren’t going to bring you a taxi, but we could give you a ride wherever it is that you wanted to go. Where is it?” They told me. “I need to go to the DEMONS MANSION. In Grand Rapids, Michigan is that okay with you.” “Well alright, would you like your driver to come?” They asked. “Actually could he drive?” I asked them. “Well of coarse if he feels fine.” They responded. “Yeah, I’m good; I’ll drive him, DEMONS MANSION right.” The driver answered. “Correct sir.” I told my driver. We got into the truck and drove away. On the rode the two of us couldn’t stop talking to each other, we asked so many questions I guaranty that I could have recited his entire life right there, actually that is what I did. Every time he answered one of my questions I repeated the answer to him. It was fun. Eventually we stopped talking, only because we were out of reasonable questions. “He kid let me see that book for a second.” The taxi driver told me. “Um, alright here,” I handed the book to the driver. “By the way I’m AJ Baed, and you are?” “My name is Bryan Baed, I knew that you had this book, I’ve been searching for it. Oh, and by the way do you remember Uncle Bryan? Because that’s me alright kid.” “Yeh I knew him, so, what do you need that book for.” The driver didn’t answer. I stopped talking for a while. “Well, you are looking for the Aquar Portal in the very top of DEMONS MANSION. How do you expect to find that? Really I doubt you could make it into Berimiun.” The driver finally said breaking the silence. I snarled and looked away. And believe me I really wanted to hit him about now. Finally I arrived at the DEMONS MANSION. “Listen kid, I need to talk to you before you leave. Kid I don’t think you will make it out of the mansion, but if you do here is my number. Call it the minute you have escaped the mansion. You got that. Also, I have something for you; take this but don’t open it until you escape the shadow world. Remember I’m here to help you out. AJ you are about to make history.” Bryan said. I nodded and finally started to walk up to the mansion. Chapter 5 The Demons Mansion I slowly walked into the mansion. “Oh my god, this place looks like an exact reincarnation of hell it’s self.” I reluctantly walked in. The doors suddenly slammed shut and I nearly jumped out of his skin. I had a deep desire to go back home and clean his room like my mother had asked. Suddenly I heard a strange noise not far away. It was about 200 feet away from him. I instantly realized what it was. It was a ghost! He had enormous yellow finger nails that looked like with one simple slice they could kill you. He was wearing a big black cloak as if he would die in sunlight. His feet were hovering maybe a foot off the floor. I looked around and saw a wall tile splitting from the wall. I tried to squeeze through in the wall but it was too tight. The spirit was getting closer; I was getting worried that this would be the end of my journey right here right now. However I found a loose floor tile and jumped through it. It was a very tight fit. I fell through the tile and into a room that made this place seem even more like hell. So, the room had a floor of pure lava. I saw no way out but a rope that was hanging on the other side of the pit. That was there, but there was also a ladder in a random place over the lava. I thought that maybe there was a way over to the rope. Before I got to see I noticed that the lava was rising! What could I do to get out of this? Well, I decided that my only chance was to get over to the ladder. So I backed up against the wall and got ready to jump. I started to think this was a bad idea. However when I saw how close the lava was I said that I should just screw the chances of making it, just screw it all, I need to jump, I thought. So I jumped across the lava, and just barely clenched the bottom in my palm. I pulled myself partially up and saw that the lava was at my foot, actually melting my shoe. It was a miracle that I made it out alive. I started to pull, hard. When I did get up I saw another room of doom. It was full of nothing, really there was absolutely nothing in there, it was a void. I really had no clue how to get across. I looked for anything and saw only a little hook on the other side of the void. I walked back to the other room. It was like nobody had even walked in there. The lava was at normal level and everything. So while I was hanging on the ladder I tried to find a way to the rope I saw. I grabbed the pealing wall tiles and tried pulling myself across the pit of lava. I saw that the piece of floor where the rope was really near. I tried to jump but didn’t feel safe hanging there than randomly letting go. So I pulled more until I felt one of the wall tiles peeling! So now what to do, I was about to plummet into the pit. Ah I knew this was a bad idea. I grabbed another piece of the wall and continued to pull across. However the rest of the tiles were pulling off the walls before I could reach them. Seriously it was like the house was alive. I had no choice but to jump. I got into a good position and jumped over trying to get to the rope. Unfortunately I missed the platform and fell. Luckily I landed on another platform across from where I had started. There was a door there so I went in. This room was fairly normal compared to the rest of the place. “Follow the trail of…” I heard a weird voice out there in the mansion. “What follow the trail of what?” I asked the weird voice. “BLOODY MURDER” The voice screamed back. Then weird sharp stars started coming flying out of the walls at me! Now how could I escape this one? Uh, I started to think deeply about this. “Wait the gift from the taxi driver! Wait but he said not to open it ‘til I got off the shadow planet, oh but this is an emergency. I guess I’ll have to find something else.” I said to myself. I decided that the best thing to do was to just run. So I started sprinting like my life depended on it across the room as fast as I could. As I started to get near the exit I could actually feel somewhat happy for myself. I reached for the door as I got closer to it. Finally I got close enough to grab the handle. However the door wouldn’t budge with my weak body. As I desperately tried prying the door open the sharp stars came closer ready to completely end the story. They got closer and closer to me and slashed against some parts of my body like my legs and stomach. But now that the pointy stars were gone I had thought that maybe the mansion had given up. So slowly I grabbed the door knob and started to pull. It still wouldn’t budge. Before I could turn around I heard the floor creaking, so I turned to see that the floor was plummeting to a pit of no end to be seen. I started to push and push the door but still, it wouldn’t budge. I started to wish I was still at school and had never met this Ollie Eve girl. I backed up a little bit and charged at the door. The door busted down and I quickly ran inside. I looked back and saw the rest of that floor fall down into the pit. “Okay not even the Devil would want to live here. I mean really I don’t even see why a demon would want this place.” I mumbled. I kept walking and saw nothing in the next room except a mirror, four walls and table. I turned around thinking that I took a wrong turn. But, the door was gone! I thought of something his friends had told him. It was a riddle. “How do you get out of a room with only a table and a mirror?” I walked up to the mirror and said “You look in the mirror… to see what you saw… you use the saw… to cut the table in half… put the two halves together… and two halves make a hole.” So once I was done saying that, there was a whole lying in the floor. “And then you crawl through the whole.” I finished and jumped into the whole. Well I hoped that maybe I had made it out and to the portal. Apparently not, I was in another weird room that looked like my bedroom. However when I looked up I saw a timer that was counting down from a minute. I heard a beeping in the room. A BOMB! I started throwing around everything thinking I may find a button or be able to deactivate the bomb. While I was searching I did find something, but not what I wanted. It was the ghost again. I tried to find a place to hide from it before he saw me. He saw me. So I ran around hoping that I could confuse it. Before I got dizzy I felt myself lifting for no good reason, it hurt, a lot. I looked back to see that the ghost was controlling my body! I was scared to death, its just a good thing I was in hell. I saw a rock lying on the ground and tried to grab it. When I got a hold of the rock I threw it at the spirit in what I think was the head, but it worked, the ghost let go of me but now was extremely ticked off at me, so he came charging at me. Once again I was terrified to my hearts content. I quickly moved out of his way and he went flying back through the hole. I couldn’t help but feel a little happy for myself. I kept searching and found nothing else out of the ordinary. I looked up and saw that I had 10 seconds left before everything would be blasted away by who knows what kind of bomb. I looked back and thought that if I left the room time would restart there. So I turned around and went back into the whole. I repeated the answer: “You look in the mirror to see what you saw you use the saw to cut the table in half put the two halves together and two halves make a hole.” So once I was done saying that, the hole was lying in the floor again. “And then you crawl through the whole.” I finished and jumped into the whole again. But when I got in I was in a different room. I wasn’t in the DEMONS MANSION any more. I saw a sign that said “Welcome to Berimiun”. I was in Berimiun! I looked around and saw a nice peaceful place, with water, light and life. But what I didn’t see was the portal. I walked around the beautiful place to see what I could find; it actually made me somewhat sad. There was tons of litter around the place. Because of that I decided to try picking up some of it. As I walked around I saw beer bottles, busted signs, and candy wrappers. This place was the hell of litter. I kept walking to see what I could find, and eventually I found a cottage. I walked up to the cottage and tried opening the door. Chapter 6 Wondrous World of Aquari The door wouldn’t budge but a voice said “What do you believe is supernatural?” the voice asked me. “Um well I know a lot about water but…” I mumbled to myself. The door began to open. “What how is water supernatural?” The door slammed shut. “Well okay fire, isn’t supernatural. Okay so let me in.” I said to it. The same went on with shadow and time. “Okay now, I know that you are.” The door flew open. And before it had time to shut I ran into the little cottage. I saw a portal in there. As I walked up to the portal I could feel my skin getting moist. Like, I was just getting out of the water. I walked into the portal and before I knew it I was in the wondrous world of Aquari! I walked around the little bit of land I was on. Eventually I saw a girl lying there. I ran over to see the girl and noticed she was a friend of mine; Serenity was lying there almost dead. I grabbed her and opened her mouth. I got ready to try to blow air into Serenity’s body. As I blew it didn’t help her one bit, actually it looked like it was hurting her. So, I thought for a minute. I lifted up Serenity and carried her to the water. As I placed her in I started to think this was a bad idea. As doubtful as I was of this idea I placed her into the water. I waited a few minutes and saw that Serenity was fine. She came out of the water and smiled. “You’re an Aquari person aren’t you?” I asked Serenity. “Um, surprise. Yeh I am. So, hi AJ.” Serenity answered. She smiled again and got out of the water. “So, what are you doing on Aquari? I mean no average human has been here.” Serenity asked. “Well apparently I’m not average. I found a book called “The Prophecy.” And it said that I am some kind of god person. I just got through the demons mansion and believe me that place is not fun.” I said to her. Serenity grabbed my hand and pulled me farther into the shore. “Well as an Aquari I guess it is my job to say hello and welcome to Aquari. This planet is probably as small as Pluto if not smaller. It is made of 99.2% water and the rest is what we are on. So obviously the people live under water. Now what is your business, oh wait don’t say. I don’t need to know that, it’s not my business.” Serenity said quickly. “Well actually I’m looking for the strongest Aquari there is to come with me and help me find the rest of the people. I know the name of her. It’s S…e…r…e…n…i…t…y…” Serenity looked at me in aw. “Oh, so you want me to come with you? I’m the only Serenity on the planet.” Serenity said to me. I shook my head in approval. “So, will you come with me then Serenity?” “Well I can’t join you unless you answer the Aquari riddle.” Serenity answered. “Well I do like riddles and I’m pretty good at them. So shoot.” I answered. “Okay well, um, it’s not a question but a lesson learned in time, it’s something unpredictable but in the end is right. What is it?” Serenity asked. I didn’t answer. “Uh, well could you give me the answer please?” Serenity asked. “How long do I have to think about it?” I asked. Serenity shook her head and walked over to the shore. She got ready to get into the water and looked back at me. She walked over to me. “Come on in. It’s the purest water in the universe. You come into it with me.” Serenity told AJ in her soft voice. “Um, well, I can’t breathe underwater.” I answered. “I can move around water for you so you can walk around under there.” Serenity told me with confidence. I shook my head in approval. Serenity started to majestically move her arm and AJ saw that the water was following her hands. “Now AJ keep your body firm and keep your heart loving and the water will turn with you and descend with you. Basically you will control the water.” Serenity said with a smile. “Before you try however, I need you to turn around, unless you want to see me naked, I need to change.” Serenity told me. “Um, I don’t think I want to see any of that, I’ll turn.” I told her. So I turned around and let her undress. When she was done she let me turn. She was just as beautiful as ever. “So now go ahead and try it.” She told me. I started to walk onto the water and noticed I wasn’t sinking. I was walking on top of the water! “Okay so I’m on top of the water but how do I go down?” I asked Serenity. “Well, think.” Serenity answered. I understood immediately what she meant. I had to simply think of what he wanted. And as I did I started to sink. However I could still breathe just like usual. I continued doing this until I could see a city in the distance. “That is Aquei, my home city.” Serenity said to me. When we made it to the city I saw a place with no fighting, however it was much more crowded than Earth. “Okay so what are we doing here?” I asked her. “Well we are here to find you a trainer so you can learn to fight.” Serenity answered. I shook my head and started to go faster to keep up with the girl. Later Serenity stopped moving. “Okay we are here, this was my previous trainer until I finally beet him, and believe me that was hard. So you go in.” Serenity told me. I walked into the underwater building and saw that it was empty except for one Aquari. “What is your business here?” The Aquari asked. “Well, I need to learn to fight. I have a friend outside your building whom recommended you.” I told the person. “Well, that’s great but listen I don’t teach beginners.” The master told me. “Oh, but you will teach this beginner. Won’t you master?” Serenity interrupted. “Serenity you know not to interrupt with your masters business. Now don’t you, and in regards to what you have said I’m never teaching a beginner in my lifetime.” The master responded. “Yes, well you have already taught one beginner and now she isn’t your apprentice, she overthrew you.” Serenity shot back. “Oh, and who might that be?” He asked. “Don’t play stupid. I did, you dummy.” Serenity answered. “What you were a beginner, I never would have... I mean you were so strong I would never think that, oh Serenity, you put a black mark on my record. You are so stupid.” The master complained. “Shut up you knew that I was a beginner and I was still better than you. Come on AJ, I guess I’ll have to train you. This so called master doesn’t know anything.” Serenity told the master and I. I nodded and followed her over to a small home that was about as big as his garage. “Why are we here, this place is puny.” I asked. “Well, this is my home. I know it’s not much but it keeps me alive.” Serenity answered. I shrugged and walked over to the home. “Well, since that idiot will not teach you I guess it is my job to do that for him.” Serenity said in a ticked off way. I nodded my head and got ready to fight. I took a fighting stance and rammed toward Serenity. Suddenly she stopped me in my tracks. “What was that for?” I asked Serenity. “Well, turn around.” She answered. Serenity grabbed me and jutted me around immediately. There I saw the master Aquari. “Well, Serenity I have been thinking about what you said and I guess I should teach this boy. And that is because of the fact that you are not allowed to leave Aquari. So bring your boyfriend here.” The master told Serenity in a cocky, yet sincere way. “Okay, for one I know I can’t leave Aquari, but neither can you. Plus, this kid is named AJ, alright. And finally, he is not my boyfriend, just my best friend. So shut your mouth.” Serenity actually said in an angry way. “Serenity, settle down, listen, I’ll answer the riddle so you can come with me, but in the meantime I better go and learn to fight like a pro.” I told Serenity. She shook her head in approval and let me go away to the master’s hut. I walked with the master to his hut. Inside he told me to take a fighting stance. He kept babbling ways to fight that obviously I could not understand. “Okay, now kid with what I just told you I want you to try and beat me. Got it?” The master told me. I shook my head and charged at him. But before I got even close to him I couldn’t breathe. He had taken the air away from where I was standing, it turned out that I was drowning as you may think. “What are you doing to AJ?” Serenity asked the master sarcastically. “What do you think I’m doing, I only agreed to train him to kill. So you two are imbeciles for believing.” The master told the two of us. Serenity pulled the water away from me and started to beat on the master Aquari. Once she was done she walked out of his building she started to tell me of what a great person he was to her before she brought me here. “So, if he was nicer to you before I was here, I’d best leave this place so you can have a friend on this planet.” I told her. “No, AJ I’d rather be your friend and not that jerks friend, oh, excuse the fowl language.” Serenity responded. “What do you mean fowl, jerk is an everyday word, not a cursing word.” I told her. “Sorry, we aren’t allowed to say anything even slightly mean to anyone else.” Serenity told me. I shook my head and started to walk away with Serenity. “Listen AJ, I have news for you once we get to my home. Is that alright?” Serenity told me. “Yeah, that’s fine.” I answered. Later when we arrived back at Serenity’s home she had to tell me a little bit of hopefully good news. “Listen, AJ according to the law of Aquari, no Aquari humanoid is allowed to leave the planet unless the one they wish to leave with can answer the Aquari riddle. Well, what I say is screw it, I’m leaving with you tomorrow at 3:30 a.m. with you, whether these people like it or not.” Serenity said to me. “Serenity, I don’t want you to throw away a perfect life here on Aquari, I guarantee the other planets will be nowhere as beautiful as this one planet. Do you wish to throw away a perfect life just for my friendship with you, and for the rest of the universes protection? Will… will you really do that, just for me?” I asked her. “Of coarse I will, I’ll leave this place even if it means throwing away my entire life!” Serenity answered with a ton of confidence. “First I have something to take care of.” She told me. Then Serenity walked over to me, grabbed my head and pulled it to her mouth. Her lips locked with mine, she was kissing me. About 1:00 went by and she finally let go. “What did you do that for?” I asked in a great daze. “Well, as thanks for finally taking me away from here. They have too many rules on this retched planet.” She explained to me while also in a daze of happiness. “So, let’s get sleeping then, it’s been a long day, and if we are leaving at 3:30 a.m. then I think we should get some sleep so we can move in the morning.” I told her. She shook her head in approval. Then she grabbed my hand, and pulled me to a small bed in the corner of her puny house. “So, how would you like to sleep?” She asked me very politely. “Why, how do like to sleep? Cause it really doesn’t matter does.” I answered with happiness still going through me like a speedboat through water. “Well, I usually sleep closely with somebody, I don’t like being alone, so would you mind?” She responded. “So, you want to share the bed, yeah, that can work for me.” I told her. “Oh, good, and thanks AJ you’re a great friend.” Serenity told me. “Well, that’s good to hear, Mark probably hates me for leaving him without a single friend on Earth.” I told her starting to hate myself. “Oh, well that is really to bad. He was nice for what I remember, and he thinks that I’m hot, what do you think?” Serenity said in response to what I had said. I blushed, and pulled up the covers for her. She got in and before we knew it we were asleep. It is easy to fall asleep underwater. The night seemed to go on forever. I wish it hadn’t ended, I had a dream, I was happy with the dream because of what it was like: I was waiting for a bride to walk down the lane at a wedding, when she arrived she was the most beautiful girl I’d ever seen, it was Serenity! I was marrying Serenity! Being with Serenity was so far the only good thing that had happened this entire journey. I was so happy in Aquari with Serenity. The only thing that I don’t like about Aquari is that murdering trainer of Serenity’s. But, Serenity was pretty, kind, and fun to be with, I was lucky that she was joining me in my journey. I can’t wait ‘til we meet the next person. During the night many other thoughts went through my head like the fact that I sill need to write to Mark, and the gift that the taxi driver gave me, it was the perfect night ever. Chapter 7 Back at Home That morning Serenity and I got up a little earlier than we hoped. Try 2:50 a.m. yeah, that early. We decided that it would be a good time to go through the portal. So we swam up to shore. Once again I had to turn around for Serenity to change unless I wanted to see her naked. So she changed and holding each other by the hand we went through the portal together. We arrived in the pond by Atbrine High School. We still had a long way to go yet we were happy to be back at school instead of in the demons mansion. Serenity pulled me out of the water, only because I didn’t have much energy. “Serenity listen to me, I need to write a letter to Mark. I promised him I would.” Here is the letter me and Serenity wrote to him: Dear Mark, I found my way through that horrid demons mansion and made it to Aquari, it is beautiful, covered with 99.8% water, but under the water there is a beautiful city with a few jerks in it, actually only one, but I have some very important news for you. You do remember that I needed to meet a heroin from Aquari and that you have no clue where Serenity is, well I met the heroin, it was actually Serenity, she isn’t a real human, she is an Aquari, oh and don’t tell my mom, but Serenity got to kiss for what seemed like forever, she is hot, you were right, and her lips taste like strawberry. Anyway, Serenity is going to write a little bit for you alright. Hello, Mark how is it going with you? Did AJ tell you that we actually lip locked? I think I’m in love, oh, but don’t tell anyone, definitely not AJ, thanks. I really appreciate you thinking that I’m hot, you are probably the first one o think that. Nobody one Aquari really likes me as much as you or AJ. But anyway the kiss was probably the best moment of my entire life. I’m serious AJ is pretty good at kissing, has he ever had a girlfriend before or have one now? Don’t even think of lying to me. Plus, I’m sorry for not telling you or that freak Kyle that I was an Aquari. Anyway I think AJ is going to want to write again so kiss- kiss. P.S. You look pretty good yourself. Hey, Mark whatever it was Serenity wrote please tell me what it was; she won’t let me read it, okay. Anyway thanks for being such a good friend and not getting ticked off at me for leaving. P.S. I wrote this letter with Serenity over by Atbrine high. So I left you a little gift around the pond alright. Your Best Friends, AJ Baed and Serenity Yes, I know that was a long letter but we wrote it. Mark seriously is my best friend ever. So, I need to tell him everything important that happens to me. And as for Serenity, I thought that maybe Mark would like to know where she was and how she was doing. So that’s why I wrote the letter that I call Mind of the Beginners. Actually, that’s what it said on the envelope. Serenity and I went over toward Marks house, it turns out Mark was outside, this early, I looked at my watch and it said 7:30, it took us that long to finish the letter. Wondering what would happen we walked up to Mark. “AJ how’s it going, and Serenity you’re here to, you found Serenity, congrats AJ. So why are you here aren’t you supposed to be at the demons mansion?” Mark asked me. “Well, I don’t have time to explain, I have a letter for you, so take it, I’ll write to you after Temmeniea, is that okay?” I told him anxiously. “I can do that, hand me the letter.” Mark ordered in disappointment. I reached into my pocket and pulled out the letter. Mark swiped it from my hands. Attitude much. Anyway, after he took the letter Serenity and I walked away. Serenity pulled the two of us under the ground using the ground water. It was awesome. She wouldn’t stop it felt like we went halfway across the planet. As a matter a fact we did. She pulled me all the way too the Dead Sea. “Well, are you ready to go to Temmeniea?” Serenity asked me. “Girl, I went through the demons mansion, duh, I could go through the Dead Sea. The question is… are you ready?” I repeated. She nodded. We both went down through the water to where the portal was told to be located. “Hey, Serenity, how are Aquaris’ born?” I randomly asked her. “Well, they are reincarnations of dead people.” She answered. “And how did you die?” I asked, thinking that was too personal. “Well, I died the same way all other Aquari are killed. By drowning. Mine however, was the most fatal, that’s because my mother was the one to drown me. She wasn’t crazy like the rest of the people to kill their children. She did it because she didn’t want the responsibilities of having to raise a girl, a year after I was killed she had a son. She still loves him. My fate is sealed; I’m not supposed to ever be in love, get married or even have a kid. It has been my dream to have a kid, to fall in love, to get married. That is all I want in my life. That and a few other things, like good friends, and not to let you down. AJ no matter what happens I’ll stick by your side. Even if I’m almost dead, I will never leave you for good, you’re my best friend.” Serenity said in response. She smiled at me and started to swim faster. She gave me a motion saying to hurry up. So I did. A few days later we finally arrived at the portal. “AJ, I’ve been waiting to kiss you again, will you?” She asked romantically. I nodded and moved toward her. Her lips locked with mine. It was so much better than the last time. Partially because she wouldn’t let go of my head. I knew what time it was when we started, I waited to see how long that one was. When she did let go it had been 1minute 45seconds long. It was definitely better than the first time. I had a feeling that she was lying when she said she couldn’t love, because it sure as hell seemed like she did love me. She grabbed me and pulled me through the portal to Temmeniea. We immediately ended up on the strange planet. “I’ve been waiting to get here.” We said simultaneously. Chapter 8 Senseless World of Temmeniea As we walked around this strange planet we noticed nothing was normal. I saw that we were next to the Death Star from Star Wars; I took a look about 20 feet away and saw the Revolutionary War. I told you it made no sense. Serenity and I were worried that we may never find Warp of Temmeniea. We began to search for this person named Warp, but we didn’t know where to look. We went in search by the Lake Loch Ness, which conveniently was a few feet away from the revolution. Once we arrived there we walked slowly around the lake in search of Warp, as you can imagine it was hard to find Warp because of the fact that everyone here could mess with time and about ¾ of the people on this planet were girls. Anyway, we continued walking around the lake, we found something, and just… it wasn’t Warp. Can you tell me of a mythological creature of which treads the depths of this very lake. At first I had no clue what it was, until of course Serenity told me and honestly I wish I hadn’t listened to her, she tried telling me that this was the Loch Ness Monster, oh, of course I didn’t believe her. Obviously however, she was right. I stared in awe at the monster, it had been lying on the beach of Lake Loch Ness, and it was dying. I thought that we could do nothing to help it. Everyone whom walked by saw the monster, but none cared. Without the help of a Temmeniean we wouldn’t be able to help the beast. However, as we waited there thinking of a way to help it somebody walked over to us. As I looked at her face I saw a worried expression. “What have you two done to the Loch Ness?” The girl screamed at us. “You’ll never guess what, but we are trying to help it.” I answered. “If you were trying to help he would be in the water already.” The girl gave as a rebuttal. “Listen I am going to need you two to come with me. I guess I am gonna need to arrest you both for near murder of the Loch Ness.” The girl yelled. We gave a disgusted glare at her and followed. After about an hour of walking we finally arrived to where the girl was taking us. It was a police station. They put Serenity into a small room with an interviewer; I could hear what they were saying: Reporter: Where were you born? Serenity: That is my business and my business alone. Reporter: Okay, the how old are you? Serenity: These questions are to personal try again. Reporter: Listen up you have no reason to deny these questions, they are all needed for the Temmeniean courts so I want you to answer my past questions truthfully. Serenity: Fine, I live on Aquari and I am 16 years old. Reporter: Good well that is all I need. Serenity: What you have enough to convict me already, you only used two questions. The reporter never answered her instead he pulled me in. Although he didn’t ask any questions but one: I see you have a sword, do you wish to fight me. The man asked. “No I do not.” I answered. “Are you sure about that I can make a deal with you, if I win you and your friend plead guilty, but if you win I rule with the two of you innocent.” He offered. “Deal.” I told him. I pulled out my sword and he pulled out his. “Touché” I said ready to kill him. “By the way, I think you may wish to know my name. I am THE IMMORTAL WEAPON MAKER! You will never kill me! HAHA.” The reporter yelled. “You know what, that will never stop me.” I yelled at the weapon maker. The weapon maker shrugged and showed no mercy but instead attacked at me immediately. As his enormous body came flying at me all I had was a split second to stop him. So I quickly yanked my sword into his way, not how I had hoped. What I wanted was to just put it in front of him; instead, it went into his stomach. “Oh, crud. Didn’t wanna do that, very, very bad.” To my astonishment however he was alive. “Why did you think I told you my name, however I am not dead you did still harm me first, and if I don’t report back to Warp, my boss will have my head.” The weapon maker told me. “Really you do that, tell her we are innocent.” The weapon maker didn’t answer instead he looked at me in disgust. “So I hear you are innocent. Do you know who I am however, I know who you are, you are AJ Baed of planet Earth, Your friend is miss Serenity of Aquari, and you two have recently kissed, twice actually.” Warp told me. “I am pretty sure I know my own name, and yours is Warp, we have been looking for you. Heroin of Temmeniea, Warp, will you join Serenity and I on a quest to destroy an ancient power set into the prophecy, I am AJ Baed, the Untied.” I said to her. “Well it took you long enough, I have been watching you two since you set foot on my planet, I would be honored to accompany you as it has been my destiny, FlashFlare is where we must head, get some rest and we shall fled Temmeniea.” Warp answered. Turns out Serenity was next to me listening. “AJ I think there is more you should know… the four gods.” Serenity began to say. “DON’T, he doesn’t need to know them he is an Earthling, they worship one god, he isn’t one of our four, he shant know about ours until the time is right.” Warp yelled back. “When is the right time?” Serenity asked. “That is up to the shadow being.” Warp answered. “Why do we need to put our faith in a shadow, it is stupid, he is nothing but a shadow and incase you have forgotten, a shadow can’t kill anything.” Serenity argued back. “You are a bit moody for an Aquari, now aren’t you?” Warp answered back.






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Zelda_Master101
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 26, 2007 @ 09:17pm
Can anyone guess where the riddle of Aquari came from?


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 01, 2007 @ 04:51am
Very good. but I noticed a few errors



DarkPhsycotic
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 05, 2007 @ 02:35pm
aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cant read it too long screen too flashy.. losing eyesite....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry i lashed out coz....


commentCommented on: Sat Apr 07, 2007 @ 01:24pm
Omg little bro, its too long and its 1:23 AM right now......I'll try finishing it later, k?



Kirisi Darkness
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 08, 2007 @ 01:36am
I know caused you tolded me otherwise i'd have no idea


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