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Hiya ppl! I'm Marluxia Oblivion! The crazy, and insane manga artist/fan is here on Gaia Online and my journal is nothing normal. LOL!=p Anyway, my journal is going to be filled with short stories and manga stories I write/wrote about. So, enjoy! MEOW
Blood Rayne: End of Chapter 1
*falls down dead* finally! chapter one of blood rayne is finished!
Chapter 1: If the lock opens.......
"Ya. Me and Crawler are from Eden Demonica. But, my "Mother" sent me here for no reason, I think." Suddenly, the door began to unlock. Oh no! Alice thought, Mother and Father are home! Alice quickly threw Lock and Crawler into the box. Nadia and Tyran came though the door. " Oh! Alice you're awake," Nadia said. " Were you good when we were gone?" Alice nodded. " Yep!" she said as she hugged her mother and father. Tyran looked at the box. " Alice, can you see if you can open that box?" he asked.
"Yes, Father," she said, picking up the box and running up stairs to her bedroom. "Phew!" Alice sighed, letting Lock and Crawler out of the box. Lock toppled over. " What was that for?!" she yelled, rubbing her head. Alice locked her door. " Look, Lock," she said." People around here are kinda churchish. And you said you're from Eden Demonica, so they'll call you a demon or something because of the 'Demonica' bit."
Lock sighed. " Maybe you're right." Crawler went on Lock's lap and fell asleep. Lock, fell asleep too. Alice picked them up and laid them on her pillow. " Good night, " she whispered, as she closed her eyes. The pale moonlight shined brightly into her window. But, an eerie shadow approached the Highwind house.......

OKAY! NEXT..........CHAPTER 2 OF BLOOD RAYNE: CROSS THE RAG DOLL!



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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 27, 2007 @ 05:23am
I liked how you ended it on a cliffhanger!!!! whee and i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!


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