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this is just stuff about n e thing really.. nothing specific.. just my ideas/thoughts/feelings.. yeah and stuff that may go on in my life
The Special Story
There once was a girl who lived in a place
Where violence and greed were in everybody’s face
She didn’t like the way she lived no she wanted to changed
But she was just to nervous to stand up and say
Exactly what she felt deep inside of her heart
She didn’t know what she would say she didn’t know where to start
Then she met this guy and she called him a friend
Who vowed to be there for her until the very end
So together hand and hand they set out on their lives
And vowed to conquer obstacles along for the ride
A couple months later things were going good
The girl got a man like she knew that she would
A decent looking man from what I can tell
But there was something about this man that he kept to himself
He was a no-good cheater with his other girls
But she didn’t know this because he was her whole world
About a month later things started getting bad
They always argued and they always got mad
Now he knew from the start that something was up
But he didn’t say a thing because he gave him some trust
And now the friend knew what he had to do
He had to talk to the girl about what she should do
He said “you got 2 choices that have been thrown your way
You can chose to leave him or you can choose to stay”
He broke it down clearly in the simplest terms
In hopes that the girl would finally learn
That this guy was a creep and nothing but slime
And that she needs to take him out of her life
So the next day she finally broke up with this guy
And finally casted him right out of her life
Feeling broken hearted she didn’t know what to do
Then the friend reached out to hold her and said “I’m always here for you
So take my hand and we can fly away
And together we can live in a special place
Cause you know that I’ll catch you whenever you’re falling
And you know that I’ll be there whenever your calling
So if you come with me I’ll always keep you safe
And we can finally live together till our dieing days”
So now they lived together and have never been happier
And now I’m proud to say they lived happily ever after







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sorrow endevored
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 02:40am
oh O_O. OH MY GOD THAT WAS GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *squeals*! did you write that ?!
so sad then sooo happy! you just never stop do you ? * starts jumping up and down clapping*! Gack! I cried on my keyboard! *run's for papertowel*
*BaBbIt* blaugh xd whee 3nodding 4laugh


commentCommented on: Tue Oct 02, 2007 @ 03:05am
.. ^^^That person is f-in nuts..



The_Hopeless_And_Broken
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YourAnonymousStalker
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 06, 2007 @ 09:23pm
Sweetie that was awesome!


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 25, 2007 @ 09:53pm
awww! the tears just keep roling dude... that's awsome... do you just think of this off the top of your head?



PrettyPurplePandasofDOOM
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Kiwibait
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 26, 2007 @ 07:53pm
hi im evilduckcomanders friend, and i just want to say wow to that poem, i write my own poems, but that one is really good. im just gald u didnt start with roses are red, violets are blue..... lol jk


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