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my stuff
this is just stuff about n e thing really.. nothing specific.. just my ideas/thoughts/feelings.. yeah and stuff that may go on in my life
Expressions
The only time, I’ve ever smiled, is when she’s here with me
The only bliss, from her sacred lips, is beyond wat the world can see
I keep looking for, the metaphor, to describe just how I feel
But all I find, inside my mind, is sumthin that’s unreal

I look inside, and try to find, the words that I can say
To describe my life, within a rhyme, that can finally b displayed
She’s always there, no matter where, I happen to be at times
Nothing I can do, can prove to you, how much I’m glad she’s mine

Struggling, tryin to win, this game that they call life
Within the shadow, of a broken house, that always seems to fight
Life carries on and continues on, like no one even cares
Unaware, and unprepared ,of the dangers everywhere

Listen to me, and you will see, just wat I’m talkin about
If you look around, where your around, emotions flying out
There’s no control, everyone’s alone, there is no sanity
Try and defy, the way of life, to maintain reality

Open your eyes, and try to find, the meaning behind this pain
You’ll realize, that in due time, there’s nothing left to gain
You say you love um, and they rise above um, and tell um how you feel
Then you turn around, and show um how, their heart is what you’ll steal

The truth behind, these random rhymes is, I just need to vent
And to ask u all, if u got the balls, to show who you represent
Life ain’t about, who yur impressin now, it’s how you truly are
So at the end of the day, you can finally say, how special u really are

The young and restless, cannot express this, cause they’re too far from intrigued
Cause when they open their eyes and, they see inside them, they don’t see underneath
The one true feeling, that’s burnin deeply, is far from what’s inside
Cause the one only, one true homie, is strapped right by his side

If you take a look, and you understood, what these people go through
Then maybe someday, we can find the way, to help these people too
The one true expression, aside from confessions, lies souly within your heart
If you don’t start there, you’ll go nowhere, and you’ll end up fallin apart






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sorrow endevored
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 10, 2007 @ 01:51am
crying good as always, actually it is great!


commentCommented on: Fri Oct 12, 2007 @ 03:47am
... This broke my heart... i wish i could help you...



The_Hopeless_And_Broken
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Adeus_Mancer
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 15, 2007 @ 11:45pm
eek i read this and............ nothing nothing!!!!! *hides in hole* ummmmmm dude ummmmmm great job *hides deaper* im not going to cry crying


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 25, 2007 @ 09:56pm
if you can only understand how i feel right now... your poems touch me deepr than anything else has... wow



PrettyPurplePandasofDOOM
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mary_alice_hale
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 29, 2007 @ 07:53pm
thought bubble: *must not cry!must not cry* crying
wow did u write this?
its so deep!
wow


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