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this is my journal of poetry. i hope u like the entries. please comment oh and make sure u start the story from the beginning
chapter 4
eclipse woke up. somehow he was back in his house. he sat up in his bed and started to think about what happened. oh yea," he said to himself." we got in a brawl with someone by the name of namine and heat. he started to get out of bed and he felt a huge pain in his abdominal area. he knealt down in pain and held his stomach. damn why does my stomach hurt so much,' he thought to himself. no matter, i have to go see where my sister is. he started to walk down the hallway using the wall on support. he slowly walked to his sister's room and he saw her sound asleep in her bed. he walked to her bedside and pulled the covers off of her and checked if she had any bruises on her. he lifted up her shirt and saw a medium sized burn mark. then he got frustrated again. he thought to himself," why her?" why couldn't it have been me.he put his hand on angels stomach and casted a spell called "aroma therapy." the room glowed a light blue as energy started to go inside his sister. the wound slowly started to heal and then the spell casted away. miraculously, he saw his sister open her eyes. she said," what happened?" eclipse ignored what she had said an d bent down to hug her. she looked bewildered for a minute and then she hugged him back. angel started to let some tears run down her eyes as pieces of memories came back as of what happened. then eclipse let go of his sister and said," im glad your alright." me too," she replied. then eclipse suddenly started to hold his stomach again and fell on her bed. angel said," eclipse your hurt." she casted a spell cure and he was back to his old self. thanks," said eclipse," we should get going. why ," she replied. cause we have to meet someone at the outskirts of town today. remember when we went to the outskirts yesterday? well it said meet there tomorrow so those two people we met there weren't the peoplewho sent the message. i tried to tell you, but you weren't listening.
oh sorry," she said. don't worry about it lets just go. they walked out the house and went to the outskirts of town. they walked a little further and ended up in a city called osaka. a few steps into the city, they heard an argument going on. angel being nosy, wanted to go see. she saw two boys and two girls. one was on the floor injured, and the other three were standing up. the boy facing the other boy looked at them and then focused back on the other dude. @

the boy came towards eclipse and said," your new, who are you? eclipse replies," my name has no importance to you." angel steps in front of eclipse and says," hi my name is angel, what is your name?" "i'm akito nice to meet you. this must be your brother. eclipse turned his back to them and angel replied," yeah, he's a real pain sometimes." he dosent mean anything by what he said, he just dosen't like giving out his name to people.he whisper into angel ear is he shy?a spiral of water came between angel and akito and they both jumped back. Eclipse, why'd you attack me? that wans't me the girl in the background said and came toward Akito. " i didn't attack you. she said innocently. akito says," then if it wasn't you, who was it? the girl with reddish orange hair said," it was the boy in the black behind angel. eclipse looked at her and then turned back in the other direction. eclipse shot a ball of water at the boy behind angel. eclipse turned around and saw the water ball coming at him and just stood there. when it got close enough, he deflected it with his hand and directed it towards the red haired girl. the ball hit the girl and eclipse replied, "thats for telling on me." phoenix stood there angry and was about to rush the boy into a wall but akito seen her temper rising so he shot a glimse at her and she froze. the boy turned to them and said," my names eclipse." "what, your name is eclipse too?" eclipse asked eagerly. thats what i said, eclipse replied. then if your name is eclipse, then call me.... luna. "what!" everyone in unison except both eclipses shouted out.
yeah, since we have the same names we can cause less confusion. eclipse walks over to phoenix and throws a towel on her and says," you should dry off your pretty wet. phoenix stood there with the towel on her head and looked at him the only thing stopping her from shooting him was akito and she kept her cool. angel walked to phoenix with a smirk on her face and said," dont mind him hes always like this please excuse him." "i'll excuse him alright, but let him do this again and there will be problems. hey everyone, i should tell you guys something. i suggest that you not mess with my brother cause he's not a normal kid. don't get on his bad side. luckilly i don't have to worry about that cause im his sister and i can't get on his bad side. phoenix ignored angel and covered akito's eyes. akito what confused at first but then he remember that his eyes were still white so he played along. "Angel i'll be back ok, im going to the bathroom." ok have a safe trip. akito arose from the ground and went to the bathroom leaving phoenix behind. "Angel do you like shopping? Eclipse asked curiously. "oh most certaintly i love it!" angel replied. Yay... want to go tommorow? yes, ill be happy to. Angel said with a smile. " your more nicer than your brother. Phoenix told angel while hiding what she want to say. i appear to be more nicer but he's actually the nice one. you see, we lost our parents when we were three and hes been like this ever since. i still remember when he used to smile at me when we were young. now i cant even get him to smirk or laugh. Angel this may be personal, but i have to go to the mall tommorow for phoenix because she just ran away from her dad and she doens't have any clothes. oh, well i don't mind going. Eclipse don't tell my bussiness like that in the open. Ok, i'm sorry that was mean of me. I'm back, Akito said with less enthusiasm than before. eclipse appeared behind him and said," i guess im back too." Sorry i have to run an errand i'll be right back and akito ran pass angel and took flight. angel thought," wow, he can fly too." eclipse wasn't even phased by the fact that he could fly. who wants some popcorn? Phoenix asked. angel replied with happiness and said, "i do i do. eclipse said," ill pass." luna said," no thanks. ok, that Akito should be back in five, four, three, two, one. Im back sorry i was slow. you were two seconds late... don't keep me waiting again. Little girl don't lose your mind just because people are here. Phoenix was silent and obey akito. "does anyone know a wide open space where i can spend the remainder of the day training?" eclipse asked. yeah i do, but can you fly. Akito asked curiously. yea i can fly. Eclipse responded. How fast? he question him.instantly he transported behind phoenix and he said," that fast." Phoenix quickly knew he was behind her because she could sense the body heat inside of him. Ok so we have no problem getting there, but i only can go 654mph in speed. is that ok with you? akito asked. "yea, but just try to keep up hope thats not a problem with you." eclipse replied. Sorry if the wind current in the air work with i can go 700mph but lets go. Akito jumped into the air and started soaring at 150mph. eclipse followed up with the same speed and soon they were both out of sight. That is too fast 700mph he can die at that speed but they wouldn't call him the wind if not. Phoenix said. dont worry, my brother's top speed is 1000mph. he trains too much and i guess it pays off. Akito almost died when he challeged himself to move at 2000mph and he broke into the wind completely. He becomes unstable and fell out the sky. that's why im scared of akito speed in the air. if he's on the soild ground and tries to move at that speed, his speed will cut in half. he will only be able to move 350mph on the ground which is very slow. so dont fight him in the air or any windy place. "ok i wont."said angel. Angel you have unusual heat flowing though your body. are you hot because you surpass the normal heat of a human? Phoenix asked. "of course im hot," said angel." im on fire baby." Phoenix stood there for a minute and said," im going to go get the popcorn." "im going with you are you coming luna? asked angel. "i have no choice it's about to rain," luna responded. they all went in the house and about an hour later, eclipse and akito walked through the door. "angel, are you guys sleeping here or are you going back to your house,' phoenix asked. angel said,"is it ok if we stay here?" "you have to ask akito," said phoenix. "ok i will," said angel. "hey akito," said angel," can we stay at your house for the night?' "yes sure go ahead. theres three free bedrooms so make yourselves at home," said akito. akito fell to the ground and luna ran to him and picked him up. she tried to wake him up but he didn't respond. luna looked at eclipse and said," what did you do to him?" eclipse replied," i didn't do anything really he didn't use any of his powers." "i may have hit him with a couple of spells, but the spells i used were minor damage spells." "its alright," said luna," hes just tired right now." while luna was saying that, phoenix believed eclipse hurt her big brother and she she rushed to him in anger with a fireball in her hand. eclipse saw her coming and grabbed her hand and thrusted it out of the way. phoenix crashed into a wall and the fireball discintegrated from her hand. "listen little girl first of all im not your brother and im not afraid to hurt you second, i didn't hurt your brother. if i did hurt him he wouldn't be alive right now. so i suggest you walk back over there to that couch and sit down and don't mistake me as someone who is scared of you cause im not. phoenix body started heating up and the first thing she did was get up and thrusted him again with a fire punch. eclipse said," i warned you.' and eclipse summoned a current of water that started raging around him. he shouted tsunami. a huge wave of water was summoned and violently charged at phoenix. luna dived in the way and rescued phoenix. luna shouted," go to your room phoenix!" luna walked over to eclipse and apoligized for phoenix's behavior. she laid Akito down on the bed. "let me have a look at him," said eclipse. luna was about to say no, but she gave in because luna knew akito needed the help and she said," go ahead." eclipse walked over to his bedside and focused some energy into his hands. he started to put them over Akito's head when luna grabbed his hand. luna said the healing ability has to have some wind in it, otherwise it will only make him worse. trust me, i know what im doing. he took his hand back and put it on Akito's forehead and Akito started to glow a light blue color. his body started to rejuvenate and eclipse started to heal him. he took his hands off his head and told eclipse," he should be okay now." after he said that, akito sprung out his bed and flipped over the whole bed and exclaimed," i feel a whole lot better."akito plopped down on the floor and said," im tired again." eclipse said," that healing ability should keep you up for awhile so dont expect to be going to bed early." luna said," eclipse, i still think he will go to sleep before that.' he shouldn't be able to, but if he does thats ok."luna said," where did he just go?" eclipse replied," hes out on the top of the roof." i think hes asleep. "out of all the places he can sleep, why the roof?" said luna. "dont know, but im bout to go out there with him cause that dosent sound like a bad place to sleep," said eclipse
yawn im getting tired said luna. everyone else is asleep so im about to go to bed. ok ill go get akito off the roof. eclipse came back with akito on his shoulder and put him on the bed. good night said eclipse. i might be up all night so dont be alarmed cause i rarely go to sleep. ok," said luna as she tucked herself in and turned the lights off and went to sleep.






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Dove Sundown
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 23, 2008 @ 04:27pm
Your narration is great, but the dialogue is kinda hard to follow from time to time.


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 23, 2008 @ 10:15pm
very well writen wavestriker! ^-^



-BlackKiss16
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shadow_wave1
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 07:15pm
i hope u like it


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