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eclipse chapter 5
eclipse woke up to a bright sunny morning. as he sat up, he looked out the window with sympathy on his face as if he knew something good was going to happen today. eclipse got up and went to look around the house to see if anyone was up. it was pretty early, so he didn't expect anyone to be up. surprisingly, he saw his sisters bed was empty and lunas bed was empty. after further inspection of the house, he found that phoenix was also gone too. eclipse wondered," where could they be?" eclipse was about to go wake the other two up, but he thought elsewise and decided to go train in the area that they trained in last time. eclipse slipped on his shoes, and started for the door. meanwhile, "phoenix, what kind of clothes do you like?" asked luna. "hmmm," phoenix thought. she was deciding on a cute orange sweater or a flame shirt that had rubies on it. "im having a hard time choosing," said phoenix. " what do you think angel." angel replied," uh, i like the red one better, but its your choice you know." "ok let me think," said phoenix. i think im going to go with the red shirt cause it looks cuter. angel thought about what she said and said," shouldn't we get both because you did say you were out of clothes didn't you?" phoenix replied," thats a smart idea. "luna, we have to get both because i don't have any clothes." said phoenix. of course i was going to get you more than one pair of clothes; i just wanted to see what you like and don't like." luna said. "ok then," said phoenix," i like this shirt this shirt this shirt this shirt and that shirt." ok well at least we don't have to pick out shirts now. lets go get some pants. "ooooo lookie what i see aren't they just adorable," phoenix said while pointing to a mini skirt. "will your brother let you get away with that?" luna and angel said. "sure why not he let me wear one before i dont see the problem with it." phoenix said. "ok, just dont get in trouble," angel said. they finished picking out the pants and went to the clerk and purchased them and left out the store. they walked back home and saw eclipse sitting in a tree. they all shouted in unison," hey eclipse!" eclipse turned his head and replied," "what took you guys so long?" "dont time me besides i had to look at every outfit in there and maybe i was a little picky," phoenix said. eclipse said," thats typical from brats like you." phoenix started to run towards him and try to hit him,but luna was holding her back and phoenix said," let me go, let me get just one hit, or give me five minutes with him." eclipse looked at her and jumped out of the tree. he went up to phoenix and said," maybe im starting to like you." phoenix said," maybe im starting to hate you." "everyone hates me so get in line little girl," eclipse said. "then i must be first in line cause i hate you the most," said phoenix. "hmph, sure whatever i have bigger fish to fry so ill be back." said eclipse. "no wait a minute, angel i need you to come with me cause i need someone to train with and i cant find akito anywhere." angel said," sure i will i guess." " what my brother's gone?" said phoenix." "Where did he go?" "didn't i just say i didn't know," said eclipse. "stop and think before you talk." "shutup stupid," said phoenix. compare the iq between you and me," said eclipse." "mines is the total of albert einstein and thomas edison yours is the brightness of a mere rodent and a rat so now you tell me whose the dumb one and pick the obvious choice?" phoenix ignored him and continued to search for her brother. "come on angel lets go," said eclipse. angel said," ok im coming." luna decided to help phoenix search for akito. "come on angel lets go," said eclipse. "ok im coming."said angel. luna decided to help phoenix search for akito. eclipse slow down angel said as they were flying to the place where there training was going to take place. they landed on solid ground in a rocky and watery terrain. they were located in the woods by a waterfall that had a sparkling blue waterfall with flowers growing around the waterfalls edge. "are you ready?" eclispe said. angel said "im ready if you are." eclispe said," well let us begin." "i want to try out this move that i learned while fighting akito," eclispe said. he unsheathed his sword that sparkled silver. angel said," what new move?" you're about to see," eclipse said as he charged towards her and swung the sword at her. angel moved very fast and dodged the blow. she was behind eclipse and was almost back to back with him. eclipse looked in back of him and his sister was in range for one of her spells." angel casted," white lightning!" a volt of white lightning came from angels right hand and eclipse barely dodged it. eclipse hit her back with his sword and said," now i can show you my new technique!" his blade started to glow a white color and he charged at blinding speed towards his sister and and started to hit her while she was suspended in the air. he swung his sword at her about 1000 times at an extreme speed. then he charged energy in his blade and gave a final slash and said," white lotus!" angel blew back through the forest at a fast speed. angel put her hands on the ground and rebounded off the ground doing a backflip and she skidded to a halt. she sat there panting and said," eclipse that hurt!" sorry," eclipse said." i guess i overdid it." the pain was so bad that angel started to cry." eclipse said to himself," now im in for it." eclipse walked ovr to his sister and picked her off the ground. eclipse picked her up in his arms and apoligized and said," ill take you to get some ice cream." eclipse didn't expect that angel was planning a sneak attack on him and angel blasted him back with electricity. eclipse slid back into a tree and crashed into it. "thats what you get," angel said as she turned away. now about that ice cream." angel said. eclipse said," ok i probably deserved that." eclipse got up and said," lets go get some ice cream." angel said,"ok!" they walked off to the ice cream store hugging and holding hands together as they looked at the dimly lit sun.






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commentCommented on: Thu May 08, 2008 @ 12:22pm
that was really cutie but really sneaky lol LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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