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Troubles, Rants, and Thoughts of a 14 year old Girl.
Useless things about the life of a fourteen year old filled with all sorts of rants. Basically, what the title says.
Seven Maidens
I have another idea for a story!!! It's actually a dream I had recently. And a little of The Craft for some reason...It was so awesome!!!! ^_^ I'll put a little summary.

Summary:

Marie Mills was the new girl in a town in Seven Hills, California. When she goes to school, she becomes part of the outcasts/the rejects. But there's something different about her new friends that she can relate to. Apparently, they can control one of the 7 elements: Light, Dark, Water, Wind, Earth, Fire, and Thunder...and Marie controls th element of Light!!! Marie's new friends tell her about Chikara Rincar, the model that is their "master". In order to release him, they need the seven elemantal keys; and the only thing stopping them are their hunters.

Seven Elements

Marie Mills-Light
Tuscany Besquillo-Dark (Kristin, being the element of darkness really fits me doesn't it?)
Nicolle Salame-Water
Kristin Stockdale-Fire
Paula Sayegh-Wind
Nicola Lipetti-Earth
Melissa Lybrook-Thunder

Seven Elemental Hunters

Anthony Sikorski-Light
Ryan Shovlin-Dark
Eric Reiplinger-Water
Kyle Farmer-Fire
Matt Garcia-Wind
Jon Ituarte-Earth
Connor Morris-Thunder

Here's a little preview I came up with...

"Wow!! This is your house?" Paula asked, bewildered. Everyone gazed at the huge mansion that was Marie's home.

"Yeah but it's a litle too big for just my family of three." Marie replied. A knock came from the front door. Tuscany went over to the door and looked through the small hole. Then she turned back to her fellow elements with panic written all over.

"It's the Hunters!!!" she gasped.

"What?!"

"They must have followed us here!! We have to get to the car and get out of here!!" Tuscany ordered.

"We can escape by going through the back!!" Marie exclaimed. Everyone followed her just when the front door was smashed down.

Answer to Kristin' Comments...

Yes, I put his name there, so what?

I put Ryan's name there because I didn't have anyone else to go up against. And I no longer like him. Besides, this isn't a romance story. It's pure action. Those boys are sent out to kill us. Oh yeah and--[tries to b***h slap you].

No Tyson! Only real people we know can go up aginst each other...

I'll put Matt against her. That should be fun. Do you thnk I should change Ryan to Tanner since i'm against him? Anyway, I new you wouldn't be too happy about Josh against you but I have everything planned out carefully.






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PointlessFaith
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 28, 2004 @ 10:39pm
u put his reall name on there??!!!OMG


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 28, 2004 @ 10:53pm
why is ryan shovlin in it??i though u didnt like him anymore.oh and i got fire!!muwhaahaaa burn mf burn!!and another thing the preview sounds uhh somewhat corny sorry *dodges b***h slap* i just have a feeling that ur going to hurt me!!.lol



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PointlessFaith
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 28, 2004 @ 10:54pm
nicola should be up against jon I!!lol and paula should be up against tyson ritter?lol


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 28, 2004 @ 11:10pm
U PUT JOSH'S reall name on there!!and u put me against him!!omg!!ill kill you!!put paula against mike or cody or uhhh matt G!!lol



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