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  • Dead:Page 11
  • Title: Dead:Page 11
  • Artist: deadpool93
  • Description: Rude comments are frowned upon in seventy states! After months, the series is back up and running! Note, I did this on a laptop. So thats why it may be a little messed up. Comment nicely and you will make me happy! :D
  • Date: 08/07/2010
  • Tags: deadpage
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • Captain Critique - 11/19/2010
  • The word bubble has a very mechanical look to it, like it was made by a machine. Drawing the bubbles without any tools to help you usually gives it a more natural look.

    This website will help you out with your horrible choice in word font: www.blambot.com

    Also...maybe you should experiment more with your shading. It would add a more dramatic effect. Tilted camera views and intense facial expressions would also help make this more dramatic.

    I'm glad to see some effort though! 3/5!
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