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  • Edward Elric
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  • Lionfish The Third - 02/08/2009
  • That's pretty good. The shading is shoddy though, and I can't help but think you traced this. There aren't any practice marks or pre-marks. His automail is in an awkward position, as is his bag thing. The white lines behind it seem odd... what are they? I'll give it a straight-up 3/5. Work a little harder and practice your shading. Don't try to draw him all at once, focus on the different parts of his body then shade in the links.
  • cheddar T - 01/02/2009
  • your erspective on the briefcase is off. the muscle structure is good and your folds and shading are wonderful. I cant really tell were the legs coming from. I can tell how irritated he is... you portray the face nicely. 3/5
  • aristofanis - 01/02/2009
  • wow...really good... Im with my mouth open :O ...Its really cool... If u could train a little bit at the face (Specialy at mouth and eyes)...5/5
    ^^
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