- Title: Free Spirit
- Artist: leavyn
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I'm submitting this into the art literary magazine at my school.
Sadly my scanner is less than half the size of the original picture so about 60% of this picture was cut off from the scan. So I'm definitely going to submit the original drawing to the magazine.
Edit;; Yes, her hair is meant to be over exaggerated.
Criticism is loved. c: - Date: 02/08/2009
- Tags: free spirit
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Johnny Thermo - 02/09/2009
- Shes melting ! surprised
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- leavyn - 02/08/2009
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Thank you all. c:
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@ Stone Temple:
Thanks for pointing that out. I actually may be able to fix that with relining her palm. c:
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@ nikuya:
Does it really matter why she is melting? - Report As Spam
- purplemxpenguin - 02/08/2009
- she's amazing
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- nikumai - 02/08/2009
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why is she melting?
looks really good though
10/5 - Report As Spam
- Stone Temple Creep - 02/08/2009
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I must say, this drawing is (in the words of a good friend of mine) pure awesome.
I hate criticism like the plague, but there is 1 thing that catches my eye that doesn't look quite right. That would be the palm of the right hand. The lines kind of go up-down when the should be more rounded to illustrate the muscles in the thumb area.
5/5 (because I love it.) - Report As Spam
- leavyn - 02/08/2009
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Thank you all. c:
Yeah, I agree the proportions are really off in this picture.
It would probably all look a lot better if her hips weren't so wide and her torso was just a bit shorter.
Though it would be an epic fail to try and fix that now. Dx - Report As Spam
- Glace_Spirit__ - 02/08/2009
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It's ok, color, hair... I like it^^
but I don't like proportions ;P
4/5 ;3 - Report As Spam
