- Title: Reese and Maricia
- Artist: yumiko27
- Description: Two characters from my comic Harmony Dawn. They're brother and sister. :) Please use constructive criticism on this. I'll never know what to improve on if you don't.
- Date: 02/24/2009
- Tags: reese maricia vampires
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Comments (3 Comments)
- yumiko27 - 02/27/2009
- Man, I knew I was right putting the picture on the Gaia Arena. smile Thanks for being so honest. I'll work harder at the things that were pointed out from the last two comments.
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- Alberix - 02/27/2009
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K, you know the guy's crotch? It's no the best I've seen..hard to tell someone how to draw a crotch though.. <_< ..I would suggest looking up a few pics, photographs etc and figuring out what the pattern or most commonly recurring core lines are that denote a "crotch"
Other than that? If you're outlining in black do so boldly me thinks.. so..once it's on the comp have a go at it with either black or a much darker version of the colour within the line.
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- the_pie_nerd - 02/25/2009
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Something other than coloured pencil to colour it.
Also, the bone structure doesn't look right. - Report As Spam
