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  • Title: Smoke
  • Artist: conduit for cataclysm
  • Description: Just a sketch in pen that I did in art class. The lady is either smoking or thinking or talking to the bird, I'm not sure. Leave constructive criticism please!
  • Date: 10/04/2008
  • Tags: faerie girl smoke city pigeon
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Comments (4 Comments)
  • twifox - 10/04/2008
  • Hm...
    Well, to me, it looks like she's about to fall over. She's slanted a itsy-bitsy bit to the left, and her head's position is probably helping that. Of course, she's smoking, so...
    Also, the body proportions seem to be a little too big and a little too thin in some places, especially around her hip-section.
    Lastly, the bird's legs aren't gonna be able to hold it up for very long.
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