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  • The death of a Venom
  • Title: The death of a Venom
  • Artist: xhielle
  • Description: A scene form my story of the death of the girl namely "Liera". The man who's holding her is her lover namely Rua..XD
  • Date: 10/11/2008
  • Tags: death venom drawing anthrology
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Korinami - 10/11/2008
  • Okay..... this is a very nice drawing. BUT..... You need to work on your form some. Their legs are FAR to large for their bodies.... and their heads are a bit too small. I'm sorry if this upsets you, but I have seen MANY drawings that I had to critique...... Other than a few glitches in your form, this is an over all nice drawing. Good job.
  • Maypole Ribbons - 10/11/2008
  • i can tell you have skills. ^^ but, i think you could've improved on liera's positioning. maybe one leg should be sprawled on the floor for effect. biggrin
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