- by NeoGeisha_Lola |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 11/15/2008 |
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- Title: Amaya
- Artist: NeoGeisha_Lola
- Description: Amaya is my first anime drawing that I have ever completed. She turned out a lot better than I expected. She is thirteen years old.
- Date: 11/15/2008
- Tags: amaya anime girl thirteen
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Comments (7 Comments)
- electricshocklightning - 03/17/2011
- I hate to say it, but it isn't that good.... sad the head is way too big for the small amount of hair you put on her, and her neck much wider than i would expect to see.
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- XxXRainbow-MassacreXxX - 06/25/2009
- ew...
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- Shalailai - 05/24/2009
- cute!!!
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- pisceswatergirl - 12/24/2008
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its really good for a first time, heres some constructive critisism:
the eyes are too big, and her face is a little too roundish, you might want to try to make it a little slenderer & the chin= not so pointy and the neck should be a little thinner. again, GREAT for first time!!! - Report As Spam
- Josh Stryker - 11/28/2008
- I like the eyes but the shading is off, her bows are nice though.
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- leixea - 11/21/2008
- I forgot to tell you your score.. 3/5
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- leixea - 11/21/2008
- I hope you don't mind constructive criticism... I love the eyes! They are perfect. The ears stick out too much though. They should be flat, not popping out. The hair is alright, it just looks a little choppy. I don't know if you were going for a choppy hairstyle, but I personally don't like it. And I think it would be cute if you put bigger bows in her hair, but that's not something you should do. Just a recommendation. Keep practicing drawing! You get better with time, but great job. smile
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