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  • My avi. Im working on it still
  • Title: My avi. Im working on it still
  • Artist: serenading_silence
  • Description: My Avatar Im Drawing. Im just looking for some pointers on what to fix. You Don't have to nice, it's just a quick sketch.
  • Date: 11/23/2008
  • Tags: working still
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • xX_Akane-sama_Xx - 01/19/2009
  • (Continued)
    in the right places and mostly right proportions. I just suggest fixing those things and you'll have s imply marvelous picture.

  • xX_Akane-sama_Xx - 01/19/2009
  • This woman has very muscular arms, that are very short. I suggest lengthening them a little and making them less buff. Most women aren't body builders, no offense meant to anyone!
    It's not her head that's too big, it's her forehead, it looks a little billboard-esque.
    If you're going to keep her shoulders the same width that they are now, I suggest making her hips a little wider, and possible making her breasts a smidgen smaller.
    Overall, the torso's length is nice, and everything seems to be
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