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  • Title: Saya (rough draft)
  • Artist: ninjaclimbs
  • Description: This is only a rought draft of a character named saya. I need some advice on this. Yes, I will add in shadings. Yes, I will add in wrinkles and stuff on her pants and coat a little more. But, I feel like I'm missing something, I just don't know what. And when I say give me advice, it's not "THIS SUXS A KID CAN DO BETTER" or that crap, because I'll just delete your comment anyway, so don't waste your time if you have no constructive critcisim.
  • Date: 05/04/2009
  • Tags: saya rough draft
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • KLTC - 05/05/2009
  • There seems to be too much white space, fill it up. She needs to be a bit more shapely.
  • ninjaclimbs - 05/04/2009
  • shadow: YEAH! THAT'S WHAT I THOUGHT TOO! but i have no idea what to do for the aura and stuff... so ill just wait for other opinions and figure it out in my final draft

    sunshine: oh i see. well i was trying to go for "she's angry and dangerous" but ill try going with yours in the final
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