- by DreamXFantasy |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 07/20/2009 |
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- Title: Painting the clouds
- Artist: DreamXFantasy
- Description: another day at the good old doodling C= please comment, rate and donate to a poor artist like me
- Date: 07/20/2009
- Tags: painting clouds
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Quasar Quirks - 07/26/2009
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((500 chara limit)
Look at your hand when working with a difficult post, so you understand how everything should sit and overlap. Finally, her face just seems to exude a mental deficiency. Try positioning the mouth and nose a bit farther down, away from the eyes, and maybe the mouth a tad smaller. For pictures like this, you don't really show the top of the nose, just a small horizontal line to show that it's there. It helps to add space between the eyes and nose/mouth. - Report As Spam
- Quasar Quirks - 07/26/2009
- Very good with the details and the coloring. However, I am extremely OCD and can spot a few problems. Besides what everyone below me has said, your anatomy needs a few touch ups. In comparison to her upper arm, her forearm looks far to long and straight. There should be a slight curve to indicate muscle, and be about the same length as the upper arm. Her middle finger looks a bit odd on the hand, and the pinky just seems to flop over, not curl and bulge like real life.
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- AllSanityLost - 07/21/2009
- Very beautiful peice of work! I absolutely love her eyes. They are nearly perfect! There's so much detail on the dress and headpiece, and that is simply amazing! 5/5!!
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- Ch!bi - 07/21/2009
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It's lovely but..
you should really really do something with the hand and the eyebrows.
And the eyelashes of the left eye are on the wrong side.. lol.
But the colouring is awesome.AMAZING job on the details!
Keep it up! - Report As Spam
- phantomshyra - 07/20/2009
- =O THIS IS FLIPPING AWESOME! =3 5/5
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- Slipspine - 07/20/2009
- Everythings awesome cept the eyelashes and eyebrows... =/
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- Lyne_Kas - 07/20/2009
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(Sorry, there's a limit of 500 characters and I didn't finish : P ) continuation~ And you need to pratice the hands (aww, hands! I hate hands x_X ) Actually they are good, but the way she is holding the pencil is weird....
Anyway, it's just things you should improve to make your arts better, BUT this artwork is really wonderful, congrats!!! - Report As Spam
