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  • Title: Colorful Luufie
  • Artist: TeddyLovingBear
  • Description: 'Eh, my hands were kinda messed. I'm getting the hang of them though.

    I'm getting better as well.

    It's a fanart for my Gaia Online Character: Luufie. I'll edit this later with the avatar reference. :)
  • Date: 03/04/2010
  • Tags: colorful luufie
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 03/07/2010
  • -continuing 2-
    do not EVER combine pixel lineart with digital paint brushes (otherwise it'll look like a complete mess), and try to work on your shades and light sources. 2/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 03/07/2010
  • -continuing-
    The waist from the chest down looks too short and too skinny; make it longer and a litter wider. The anatomy is really the one thing that screws up the whole picture. I would like to recommend some anatomy studies. Also the skin needs more light contrast; it looks too solid with the orange color. Heck, you should make the shadow on the skin darker because I can barely make out that shade.
    So in all I guess work on you anatomy (look up on anatomy reference sheets and studies),
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 03/07/2010
  • (Roguetwo, would be nice if you gave her a constructive critique instead of challenging her. smile
    The anatomy is really whacky and it looks like you combined sprite lineart with a digital paint brush program. These two things don't look well together and it just makes your picture a complete mess. But I have to say I like how you colored the clothing. One thing I have to say be careful of how you draw the face; that one eye is too squished and too far to the ear.
  • roguetwo - 03/06/2010
  • I'm commenting on this because your drawing is not very good or in a short cut anime style. I have a challange for you use any pencil and look in a mirror, do a sketch of your self with all the little details and shadowing you see, but it must be a realistic sketch/drawing not in a anime or just a line sketch. pm me if you accept this challange.
 
 

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