- Snow flakes fall as i walk home from school i look up to the sky and catch snow flakes in my mouth... I dream im flying. then fall...lifes is snow dream...i think...
- Title: ~Snow flakes~
- Artist: jwezze
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- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: snow falkes
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- princess11004 - 12/28/2008
- i like it
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- Renee the Rabid Squirrel - 12/18/2008
- What I think, is that you didn't write a poem. You wrote prose. And it wasn't really that great either. You need to describe things more, and flesh out what you're doing. Also edit your work.
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