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You are my sister in all ways but by blood
You have helped me in ways that no-one else could
We are there for each other when love is needed most
If it wasn’t for my big sister, I’m sure I’d be a ghost
When I first met you, I saw something special inside
Then I fell in love with you, and that I can’t hide
We shared the strongest kind of love, a bond of brotherhood
I needed you to be my sister, and I always knew you would
When you hurt yourself, it takes a lot for me not to cry
I want to keep you happy, and so all I can do is try
You broke into my life and brightened it with your smile
The time we shared was amazing, if it was only a while
I love it when you hold me, you give the best hugs ever!
The friendship that we share, is something I'll always treasure
But now you’re leaving, and I’ll miss you so damn much
I want you to go with all my love, and with the best of luck
These are the words that for so long I have left unsaid
Now my eyes are hurting, from the tears no longer unshed
We’ve gone through a lot together, both the good and the bad
But I’m glad I could share it with you, the sister I never had
- Title: Becca's Poem
- Artist: Hokerou
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I may as well give it a shot!
I wrote this poem for one of my best friends, just before she moved away. She's one of the few people who truly know me and is a blessing to all that meet her. She's helped me through a lot, and continues to be my big sister whenever either of us need each other.
Comments appreciated! - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: sister brother love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Armageddon Majesty - 12/15/2008
- Aww, dude you're going to make me cry - that's so beautiful, I'm glad you have a friend like that <3
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- Miss_Mad_Hatter87 - 12/15/2008
- beautiful poem, and I'm sorry she had to leave man, sadly thats life though.. people leave, but then they never really leave, because they are always in your heart.
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- Nataani - 12/15/2008
- Very touching<3
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- r_s_boston - 12/15/2008
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Awww. Sounds like's a wonderful friend. I envy you in all honesty. smile
Anyway, nice job on this and good luck with the contest. Cheers! biggrin - Report As Spam
- Hokerou - 12/15/2008
- She is =3
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- ClanSoul - 12/15/2008
- Beautiful :3
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- Hokerou - 12/12/2008
- It was written at 3 AM after a night of heavy drinking with another of my best friends, being the last two at his Christmas party. I've often thought about coming back to it and improving it, but I felt it would take away from the emotion in it. Hopefully anyone who reads this will understand my love for her and my sadness at her leaving.
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