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The fluffy winter willows blow
Through the flakes of pearl white snow
While icicles drip their crystal blood
Which makes the tiny valleys of snow flood
Jack frost tease the windows with chill
And kids slide down the marshmallow hill
Twinkling snowflakes fall slowly from above
Just like two snow birds who are falling in love
- Title: Winter Willows
- Artist: keilarah
- Description: The first poem I have ever written, besides in elementary school LOL So, I hope it's good!
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: winter willows
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Comments (4 Comments)
- weezieishness - 12/16/2008
- I disagree, the blood bit works well. I think it's great, beautiful imagery. Much better than a lot of the stuff I've been reading on here.
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- dbz_kakarot - 12/15/2008
- It's ok, the blood doesn't quite go with it
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- keilarah - 12/15/2008
- Why thank you smile Didn't take me long to make it up either! Hehe!
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- Echoez - 12/12/2008
- It's awesome o.o
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