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As I watch the snowflakes falling
I feel as if someone's calling.
A voice of ice,
Small as lice,
It tells me where I'm `sposed to be.
I walk into the wonderland,
I feel dragged down as if by sand,
The sky is gray
But that's okay.
I know in my mind
That this world is truly kind.
If you read this
may you be found by winter's kiss.
-PolarSquirrel (Brynna D.) heart
- by PolarSquirrel |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/24/2008 |
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- Title: The Winter Landscape
- Artist: PolarSquirrel
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Description:
*COMMENT PLZ*
I wrote this in 15 minutes so don't blame me if you hate it. I was in the mood and I saw this contest so I figured why not! Please comment on my profile or on this, whichever. Oh, and put this in your thoughts, I'm only in the 7th grade.
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P.S. i never write poetry but i might star `cuz that was fun. :D - Date: 11/24/2008
- Tags: winter landscape polarsquirrel brynna goff
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Comments (5 Comments)
- maki tsuchi - 04/06/2011
- its pretty good, even if u wrote it in 15 minutes
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- Butterfly Linda - 06/15/2009
- really good especially the rhyming parts
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- vamprisskat - 02/10/2009
- i liked it good ryhmes, you should try some more writing poetry is good and fun
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- destiny hope harmony - 01/02/2009
- i like how that rhymes
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- PolarSquirrel - 12/10/2008
- type error, star is start in the description. my bad...
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