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It's cold outside as it is snowing
But it's warm inside around the fire
Gathering around the tree, and seeing what's inside
We light the candles every night
One by one until all eight are shining bright
Oh what a joyful sound we hear, Hanerot Halalu
We celebrate and give our thanks
To everyone we love
Have a very happy holiday
From all of us
- by JGdancinchick |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/25/2008 |
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- Title: As we come together
- Artist: JGdancinchick
- Description: This poem includes the major holiday traditions I think of. If yours is not in there, please don't hate me, but I am trying to be a fair to people's religions. oh, and this probably won't rhyme.
- Date: 11/25/2008
- Tags: come together holidays
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Comments (2 Comments)
- MizzDaeJa - 04/04/2009
- hat was good and thank u
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- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 03/21/2009
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Rhyming doesn't make poems great. It's just really appealing to the ear.
This is okay. Not great and no clear subject but if you had incorporated more specific traditions, it could be a lot better. - Report As Spam
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