- as kids play in the snow as runny noses run as cloud feet and frost bites on your toes as hotcholet you drink and the fire keeping you warm and snowmenand women that is ehat winter is all about and more.
- Title: winter
- Artist: steilla
- Description: as kids paly in the snow as runny noses run as colud feet and frost bites on your toes as hotcholet you drink and the fire keeping you warm and snowmen and women that is what winter is all about and more
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: winter
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- IchigoRomance - 09/07/2009
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I'm sorry but if I could I'd give you negative stars.:/ But maybe that is because I believe in typeing and spelling as best one can.
*As kids play in the snow, as runny noses run.
As cold feet and frost bites on your toes.
As hot chocolate you drink and the fire keeping you warm.
Snowmen and women, that is what winter is all about and more.
Blah. I can't fix it without alot of work.
1 star. Improve your skills then try again.:] - Report As Spam
- sharkserpant20 - 04/24/2009
- no rhyme or reason (literally).
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- xX_ITeChNo619_xX - 02/28/2009
- so short needs to be longer than this
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- sami_soso - 12/23/2008
- no comment, 3 stars
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