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Christmas time is here,
a wonderful time of glee.
We all sit around opening presents,
around this big old tree.
Around the world is Haunakah,
where the candles are brightly.
Eight days, eight nights and eight times the fun,
the happiness is not unsightly.
Kwanzaa is another time,
where we all gather around.
Usually African American celebrate it,
as the candles are being bound.
We all have different holidays,
and noone really cares.
What matters is if you celebrate with,
the magic in the air.
They only come once a year,
so celebrate as you can.
Because they all bring families closer together,
and it will create a healthy man.
- by Greendobbie13 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/26/2008 |
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- Title: Winter Holiday Poem
- Artist: Greendobbie13
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Description:
My version of a December/January Poem.
(Because some of the holidays last longer than you think)
XD- Greendobbie13 - Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: winter holiday poem
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Greendobbie13 - 02/18/2010
- ohhhhhhh....o-o...o{}o
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- pollysmiles101 - 01/25/2010
- Sorry, but "noone" is two words... "no one." When in doubt, use "none" or "nobody." I don't mean to sound rude but I am a complete "grammatic finatic." Nice use of rhyming though and fine description.
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- qouth - 09/04/2009
- is sad surprised -nodnod-
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- NoNo Nope - 02/07/2009
- you do not need rymes i will be nice and give a 4
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- El SuPeR bEaStO - 12/15/2008
- no no no no NO! HORIBLE YOU KNOW YOU KNOW WHAT YOU GET A 5/5 TAKE THAT TAKE THAT!
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