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even if we cant afford for a visit from santa this time around/
the fact you love me I can see in the tuition bill I found/
I love you mommy I just wanted to let you know/
Im here forever Ill never ever let you go/
daddys gone on buisness for now but its alright its ok/
well have fun by ourselves this year on christmas day/
I got a job a while back probably been 3 months now/
I bought you this gold necklace-the job thats how/
now mom one last thing today I got another suprise/
you always did but I took care of dinner this time/
Im sorry its just too bad you been sick for a while/
all I wanna do is look over and see you with a smile/
but if this our last chistmas I want it to be the best/
its alright mommy I got this you can take a rest/
Good Night...
- Title: Mommy
- Artist: Jst2cool
- Description: My mom died one christmas when we had all the family over I bought her a necklace and I cooked the food...she said she felt tired and went to sleep and never woke up.Thats the inspiration behind this poem.
- Date: 11/26/2008
- Tags: mommy
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xponieloverx - 06/22/2010
- it's so sad. im really sorry for your mom.
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- EmiKo_KajuJi04 - 12/03/2009
- wow, im really sorry for ur mom, must been hard for you. im sure she's safe in heaven now and must be really proud of you. Keep up the good work and someday, ur gonna see ur mom..well, once again, sry for ur loss and, merry christmas and a happy new year.
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- Supreme Overlord Jessie - 07/31/2009
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Good poem
Im sorry, the ending of your poem is making me cry D: - Report As Spam
- Digital Witness - 06/29/2009
- I'm sorry for your loss. Those wonderful things you did for your mother. It was very sweet and I'm sure your mother appreciated it. Beautiful poetry.
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- DragonAssassinTannaquil - 06/10/2009
- I'm so sorry that happened to you. A good way to deal with it, I suppose. I'd describe it as bittersweet... Sorry again, and 5 stars! smile
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- kyasurinviakathryn - 01/08/2009
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that was a really good story
imm sorry.
it reminds me of the song christmas shoes. - Report As Spam