- after the leaves have fallen and the days grown shorten, the blankets begin to fall.Blankets of wite begin to fall to earth. oung children play in their icy-wetness. Some sled, some build, some eat, some roll, and some leave it be. Its magic as people say. Snow is ,agical. Its a prestegous honor to see it. A gift from god in the cold seasons, if you will. It dos not last very long, nor will it stay. Spring soon has to come and no one can stop it from arriving. The white, fluffy blankets slowly begin so melt, the days become longer with each passng hour, and there is no need for the snow-suits. The heavy coat will be put up, the boots away, the mittens in the basements, the hats on their hooks, and the pants in their drawers. Winter is gone, spring ishere, summer will come, fall is a few months away, i haveto wait till next year to play in the white, fluffy blankets again.
- by immortal vengance |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: blanket
- Artist: immortal vengance
- Description: um this i for theholiday thing though i really dont celebrate.
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: blanket snow seasns
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Comments (2 Comments)
- vellvatein - 12/30/2008
- uh, baby, did you not go back and revise it? it was soo way better in class, troy, you have to edit, you forgot most of the poem, damn!isn't it hangin' in your kitchen? i think it is, you should edit it, but now its too late, its still really god, your good at poetry, i like it, the speling sucks and its a little mixed up but you did good, so ill gove u a 5/5 for the original.
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- Flywheel25a - 12/15/2008
- "A" for effort. It's a halfway decent peice.
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