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I look out the window of snowy white crystals over the widow tree
Snow fairy figures dancing round the city square, dancing round with there feet bear
I love the snowy wonder glitters, crystals , fairies a galore... What about the man with the white snowy beard? Does he have and wonders of this glory? I wish i knew i wish it was all true but then i noticed i wasn't sleeping it was TRUE! Fairies are cold and wet and i see there very upset I'll bring them inside and give them a cup of cocoa and ask them do u like it inside? Snowy wonders every where...never dance in the snow with your feet bear.
- by CrAzY CoOkii |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: Snowy Wonders
- Artist: CrAzY CoOkii
- Description: Everything outside in the snow is so glorious so i wrote this poem please vote! thanks
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: snowy wonders
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Comments (3 Comments)
- !maginary rain - 06/04/2009
- not bad. the only thing that bothers me is the word inside that doubles in one sentence. otherwise it makes you see the whole snowy magical thing going on and i'll give you a 4 smile have fun
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- xMurck - 04/19/2009
- i like it
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- CrAzY CoOkii - 11/29/2008
- I tried my best hope u like it!
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