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Broken love
I was walking through the town
That is when I saw you
Your beautiful black hair
Your beautiful blue eyes
Your perfect face
I was so in love
You walked up to me
And said: " Hi how are you ?"
My heart stopt a beat
My eyes only on you
My voice lost
I said:" I'm in love"
You laughed and kissed me on my cheek
My cheeks turned red
Then you said:" I'm too but not with you"
My heart broke and you carved a knife in it
How could I be so stupid
How could I let this happen
I cried but not in front of you
I was heartbroken
for always.....
- by Demon Nikaya-sama |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Broken Love
- Artist: Demon Nikaya-sama
- Description: who love can turn out when you are the only one how love the person you love
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: broken love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Yumi Dark Rose - 05/16/2009
- aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 1/5!
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- Sakura lady of death - 12/17/2008
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This is a beautifully written poem and it is filled with emotion, but why is it in the Holiday Contest?
Again, beautiful poem though. - Report As Spam