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Fire ends,
Fire starts,
Fire brings back the lost.
Fire burnt me,
Fire caused me loss and pain.
Fire gave me new life,
Fire gave me new meaning,
Fire brought me to realize the pain we all need to feel.
So tell me, what is fire, the helper or the ruiner?
- Title: Fire
- Artist: vgfbh
- Description: wow, my best poem ever
- Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: firepain
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Aris_Miyu_Phoenix - 04/03/2010
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FIRE!!!! i am a pure pyro n i hav to say that this poem is true...and my response to the last line is that fire is both/neither helper and ruiner...
a flame is untamable and unpredictable. u dont kno wat it may do.
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- Zynd the Lucky - 02/04/2010
- hmm... i'm a bit of a poet, so here's some helpful criticism: redundancy is not really fun to read, but you seem to have the makings of a great poet!
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- -Broken Demon of Death- - 08/02/2009
- Gah, fail. 2/5 Sorry.
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- lord-of-TV - 06/30/2009
- bad!
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- Genesis2k35 - 03/23/2009
- Not bad.
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- anaphyIaxis - 12/04/2008
- AWESOME POEM!!!!!!!!
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