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When snow falls it's gives something to us
Joy, Happiness, Love and Beauty .
Kids rush out just to play in the snow
and in joy the winter.
When that snow is gone things are taken away from us,
Beauty, Happiness, and Joy
You can find love any time, any where.
When people and kids come out, there sad
No more snow
We can't in Joy the beauty in the seasons like we used to
Things are disappearing . taken from us one at a time
Please let it snow again just for this winter.
May we see snow once again.
- by RedGray_Trickster1 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: Snow.......is gone
- Artist: RedGray_Trickster1
- Description: the reason that I made this poem is because it doesn't snow that much where i live. 3-5 years ago there used to be so much snow that you could get snowed inside your house. and now in 2008 almost 2009 there is barely any snow out here at all.
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: snowis gone
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Juanito Shet - 02/07/2010
- Eeeeeeh... its okay. Snow ain't all that wonderful anyway, not if the children get SICK and they die in their homes or something ya know? Haha just kidding, its alright, 3/5.
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- xXstay-GXx - 04/06/2009
- You were very honest for wht your wrote and i could feel the emotion when i was reading it.......... i really liked it..... i think you would be number 1!! in the contest
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- Elden Andel - 01/04/2009
- Global warming in effect.
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- storm hawks7girl - 12/16/2008
- nice poem i like it ^^
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- RedGray_Trickster1 - 12/16/2008
- please leave your comments; let me know what you think ok
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- ziana268vanter - 12/15/2008
- wow this sad but i like it it hardly snows where i live. so it will come just wait
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