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'Twas the night before chrismas,
And everyone was running,
To get to their home because Santa was coming,
Snow flurries were falling and covering streets
As people were singing and handing out treats,
Though people were happy and people were glad,
There was one teenage girl who was ever so sad
For the one that she cared for was not to be seen,
Storm clouds developed in this very young teen.
"Again I am alone" the teen girl had said outloud.
"I'll never love again." The teen girl had just vowed.
With a devistating heart she had walked to the park,
Wanting to get home before it got dark,
From not far away, a young lad had kept eye,
Feeling sudden guilt, as he thought himself a spy.
Walking to a tree, she hugged it so tightly
As snow begun to fall just ever so lighty
Walking up to her he put his hand on her shoulder,
"You better get inside, before it get's colder."
She looked up in surprise to see it was him,
The one she cares for, who was filled with whim,
"I'll never leave you." The young lad told the girl.
"You mean everything to mean. You're more improtant than the world."
Overcome with such joy and overcome with cheer,
The young teen had smiled, and had even shed a tear
"I love you so dearly." she said in great bliss
And without sudden warning, she thanked him with a kiss
A mistletoe was hanging from the tree up above,
Which proves my story of Snow Fallen Love.
- by I Wanna Brownie |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: Snow Fallen Love
- Artist: I Wanna Brownie
- Description: My Christmas Wish.
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: snow fallen love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Dark-Huntress-Simi - 07/29/2010
- I'm sorry to be the 'Debbie Downer' here but, you have a typo in about the 23rd line. I don't mean to do this, but I think you meant 'me' instead of 'mean'....so that it would say "You mean everything to ME" However, overall, a very nice piece. Kudos. 5/5.
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- AngieStarz - 03/03/2010
- she is lucky :3
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- xMurck - 04/17/2009
- oh that was cool i like that
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- baby2426 - 12/16/2008
- that was so good
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- Clintorus Eastwood - 12/16/2008
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I could totally rap this out, dude.
Man, you're a pop stahh xD Kudooos - Report As Spam
- Vexed Bullet - 12/05/2008
- Best. Poem. Ever. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVEEEEEEEEEEEEEER.
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