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The Cold weather
Appears anytime
For we all
Share a winter time
I know what you think
This maybe stupid
But I'm trying to rhyme
The trees freezes
there is no rhythm
There's no sound
It's like a memory
Playing back and forth
The snows and day changes quickly
We fall
We enjoy
the sweet moments
that our lives awakened
The sunlight is dim
it's turning cold
The most cheerful time
is to give gifts
But... whether we get anything or not
we always get something
and we always had something
whether you see it or not
we have our family
we have ourselves
we have a life, given by our parents
Christmas is just something...
that you can never forget
It maybe
the coldest holiday
but inside
we're still warm and comfort
by ourselves, friends and family.
- Title: Cold Days
- Artist: Black Ski
- Description: We face the cold days. It mostly happens in winter. This poem rhymes sometimes but... overall, I didn't want it to rhyme so, enjoy. :) I was trying to discribe winter and christmas but... It was kind of hard cause, I didn't write it down. I had it in my mind. i hope I did the best I could to discribe the cold holiday. Thanks ^^!
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: wearestupid
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- spytechkiller - 06/05/2011
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- Mario the Davidic Hero - 09/03/2010
- marvelous, lad! 5/5
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- popcornz_98 - 07/13/2009
- UR DOING GREAT
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- ChelsAshley456 - 07/10/2009
- That wasthe best peom ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- chaos_lava_girl - 07/04/2009
- I love it
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- Hina Flakes - 06/02/2009
- i think it was great!! i like the fact that you weren't trying to rhyme it..i like those kinds of poem better!! smile
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